by justjohn1013
Wow, what amazing imagery. Very sensual, very very poetic and descriptive. It made me want to curl up with my lover. I loved it.
I like the sensuality of this piece. Especially the understanding the man has of the woman. His inner dialog acknowledges without judgment the things that may keep her awake. It's the hour, the tone, how well the man knows the woman's mind and body that makes this piece so attractive to me.
YP
What an incredibly beautiful story. My greatest desire is to have someone want to please me like that, and I can easily imagibe myself in her place. So passionate and erotic.