All Comments on 'Late Night Under The Stars With Mom'

Nice story but we exept new chapters " My Mom is a Hot Mom"

When is relase date ?

And dad , oh!! well he's out cold. Not as hot as pt.1, but you still get 5 big one's. thanks again for the read.

How about Maddy and Kyle with Emma and her son. Maddy and Emma find out they are each fucking their sons, set up a double date.

Check your positions, had Maddy with her eyes in the grass & watching the stars at the same time and a couple of other impossible positions. Good story otherwise.

This one, in my opinion, was more realistic than the first. Her resisting at every chance and the son having to keep pushing the limits is entertaining to watch. The battle to get her alone was so funny to me and i laughed every time they tried to counter each other. 4/5

I enjoyed this one as much as the first. More please...? Maybe one of her relatives dies and she and Kyle drive to the funeral (road trip) and dad stays home for work. So many things can happen??? Thanks again for a great story.

More, please, it was really good story, keep them fucking and making love to each other, move Carl out of the picture, get her pregnant and...

Hope you continue the story.

What Will Mom do next?

Excellent writing.

Loved this, even more than the first one (if that's possible!) 5 stars.

A worthy sequel to part one. I did not make it all the way through before my pants we around my ankles and I was cumming in my hand. I love moms resistance as it adds reality to the series but I also love how with persistence the son concurs his loving mother. Dad is oblivious and goes off to sleep it off as his wife is helpless to stop herself from submitting to her son. I love the description on the the son mounting his mother doggystyle on the lawn. Had dad looked out the window he could have watched his cuckolding. This son knows the pleasure of sliding his bare cock into his mothers pussy once again. Mom is showing her submission to her son's cock by allowing her son to lay siege to her married pussy as she is on her hands and knees on the lawn. With each thrust of her son's cock mother and son are closer to paradise until finally her son grunts and fills his mothers womb with his seed. This final taboo act will send mom over the edge and both mother and son will become addicted to their taboo orgasms. Each night mom and son will await dads bedtime so mom and son bonding can occur. I eagerly await the next story from this writer, five star ranking from me

enjoyed the series. You've handled a common plot line -- horny ambivalent Mom trying to resist the single-minded determined horny son - well. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Loved your story, it got my panties so wet. I only have a daughter. Now I wish I had a son.

Thank you!

I will check other stories of yours.

Väga hea lugu,ma lähen vaatan oma ema ka üle,ta on täna õhtul üksinda kodus.

I think I figured out that the previous commenter's language is Estonian, and that "vaga kuum" means "very hot." I'm very flattered that someone whose primary language is Estonian would say that about my story. Thank you very much!

Id love to see a sequel where she's pregnant and she just tells her husband he was to drunk to remember. also loved the foot worship.

I hope our guy SimonDoom make this as a saga, there still so much to tell and I like to see their sweet ending.

Another excellent addition to the Late Night Under series, the scenes were incredibly hot, and the conclusion a thrilling one to see Maddy finally in acceptance of Kyle's lust for her. I think I would speak for many of your readers when I say I would definitely like to see a third part to this. One in which mother and son develop their new found intimacy further, turning lust to love, and ultimately result in pregnancy.

If possible, please consider this, in the meantime I've given this an enthusiastic 5 stars and have added it to my favorites.

Thank you , Simondoom . An excellent story. I too would like see this affair continue!

Once again SimonDoom you've crafted another hot, love/sex story. Please add more chapters to this story.

I always like a good story. It was interesting to watch Maddy's struggles with her conscience. "Late Night on the Loveseat with Mom" was the first of your stories I read. This was definitely a good follow up. If you decide to do a third I'll be glad to read it.

When gets his mom bareback let's him cum in her cunt 2 things on the pill or gets pregnant to me mom that's at the age of 25 to 50 show let their sons fuck them bareback and cum inside them I know I got 3 friends moms pregnant and my mom and 2 aunts

Please continue this series. Would like to see Kyle keeping Mom on her toes (back). Then Mom lets it slip, during lunch with Emma. Emma confesses to her own misdeeds. They agree to do a webcam with their sons.

Call it Late Night on the Webcam with Mom!

how about late night at the lake in a tent?

love the shooting stars she sees during the sex

please keep this story going on....some daily encounters of there love making and eventually Maddy opening up her kinks with her son and being incharge.

Please keep your story updated, I truly love them.

Daily Mom should take care of her son, I would hehehe.

Thank you

Annie

Mom is doing all right for herself, but I wonder if son Kyle might do even better, with mom's friend Emma, who if probably also getting it from her own son, and wondering if there is more available elsewhere.

I rarely give out 5 stars but this one even deserves a 6. Please please please do a story where they go on a date or to Las Vegas and she takes her time picking out the perfect dress and heels for him.

Okay, this was much better. IMO it rates a 5. Well done.

Well...well...well. FINALLY as story with substance. You have a good imagination and you weave your readers very well into your deliciously naughty imagination. I believe you have the ability to be a LOT better writer.

The sex part of the story is rushed too much. It SEEMS that you like subtleties in writing the sex parts of this story, but their are ways to be more descriptive with sex without getting too RAW...at least too raw too soon.

You are good at weaving your audience teasingly into this story, but I believe you can do even better.

One suggestion is to back away a bit by taking mother and son close to the edge, and have the mother give her son a naughty taste of a HINT of her desire. Have mother or son developing interests in what the other loves or likes...this would be more REAL to life. YES, we know these stories are fantasy, BUT you must maintain, with class, the part of these stories that is NOT fantasy...a mother's enduring love for her son.

Peace ✌

Well written story. I liked the interaction between mother and son. It would have been nice if the son had asked if the mother was on birth control. No one seemed to think or consider pregnancy. Finally, a little more character development would have enhanced the story. What did mother and/or son want or need from each other? After summer, what were their respective plans?. Sex is fine but there has to be more.

Absolutely loved this mini series! Wish you’d continue it on! There’s so many potential possibilities this could give. If you’d like ideas, I’ve got several. I’m a writer as well just never been brave enough to post any of my stories

Another wonderful story. I gave it 5 stars. By the end of this sex session, Maddy knows that Kyle will be fucking her whenever he wants to from now on and she is good with that. Great follow-up story to the first late night story. Good job!!!

Great follow up..you have a wonderful imagination..keep it up.5🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

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Outstanding story and a great follow-up to the other, so very well written and told.............():\

Awesome story and a good follow up you need to continue with more of this mother and son romance!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Brilliant keep writing

Sexcellent!

11/10 Shooting Stars!!!!!

no dialogue????

Don't stop with this story line!!! One of the few that I was very excited to see a part 2 ;)

Well done

Sadly, you have no real creative writing abilities. You do have a good imagination. However,

you lack the ability to put your thoughts into a well written, and enticing formula that would occur in a mother son sexual relationship.

Some would say that a real incestuous relationship between mother and son would be too twisted. I say that a mother and son relationship would be an "OTHERWORLDLY" experience that no other but a mother could ever give her son.

The unbridled desires of a mother towards her son would be the ultimate in eroticism. The feelings of your mother's hesitancy leaving her body to consume you with her desires would be beyond anything anyone else could possess with.

The taste of your mother upon your tongue as you realize her flesh is now engulfed in flames because of you would be beautiful.

This was so hot! I loved it! Thank You!

Good story but not as good as the first one when he fucked his mother. Kyle seems to be more focused on the fucking than loving his mother and is almost too pushy. He's taking too many chances, but I guess I can understand that, the little head is doing all the thinking for the big head.

Really appreciate your stories!

This was so hot! I loved it!

Are we ever going to get an other chapter to this wonderful story?

Another fun read! One issue I do seem to have with your writing is, every time I finish a story, I ALWAYS seem to have a gooey wet spot in my shorts!

But, getting back to this story, when Maddy and Kyle were doing their fifteen minute countdown, I thought it would have been exciting if the last shooting star appeared just a couple of seconds after the fifteen minutes had expired. Then, with Kyle looking disappointed and Maddy still squirming with her own uncontrollable desires, she stripped off her dress anyway and invited Kyle to let the games begin.

Just my two cents…

Very boring, it was all waste of time

"The story builds slowly but like a " Hallmark type movie" it became pretty predictable. Enjoyable but certainly predictable. Good job .... No rape, no rudeness, just loving lust for one another.

Well done, very well done. Hopefully more.