All Comments on 'Laundry Day'

Sory to have to say this, but it is not up to your usual high standard of eroticism.

..it's only a stroke piece.

I loved your story! So damned dirty, and aunties are supposed to be prim and proper. I always find grammatical errors, having been an English major in college, but I loved "Billy groaned when she lay on her back". Not one of these writers in a hundred ever gets that right, but you did. Then they go and write something stupid like "she lay her hand on his shoulder," where laid really is indicated.

A cracker : a lot squeezed in to a little space, as it were.

Very intense and erotic. I like your style and ideas. Thanks.

Now that's what I'm talking about.

Fantastic weekend 😂😄