All Comments on 'Laura'

by johnnieblue44

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Hot!

Well done, descriptions defy imagination.

H.H.MorantH.H.Morantalmost 13 years ago
Romance?

This story was pure stroke, with with the author demonstrating no particular effort at creating a plot or back story. The problem I have with pure stroke is that it almost always turns out to be little more than "insert Tab A in Slot 1" and so it was with this story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Nice

I also enjoy the very things you write about in this story. Well written. Loved it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Mmmmm - yes, very!

My love and I have a date cuming up soon - have to see what we can do about 're-creating' some of the pictures you painted for us...

oldtwitoldtwitover 12 years ago
Fantastic

What a fantastic read, so real so sensual , oh to meet another woman like her....

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