All Comments on 'Laura Undone'

The theme is not new: posh lady gets blackmailed to sex by disgusting bad boy, but the coercion turns similar to seduction. While not new (but was it not Chaplin who was skeptical about novel gags? if not, another knowing one said that), this story is a very well executed score. I think the first-person narrator had spice to it. I had a similar opinion of "The Video" by er2122.

I enjoyed your story, I'll look forward to more!

You should have told your husband