by creamsoda25
Started really well - up to the cheating discovery and revenge fuck ... then I felt disappointed with the stereotype ending. No drama about possible reconciliations husband or lover) no emotions in fighting fo r kids ... nor any scenes giving husband second thoughts about controlling behavior - or lover about being a lazy cheater. All th characters seem to behave like black-and-white scetched. Some depth and evolvement would benefit both characters and story.
Discovery, confrontation reasonable ending. I just love this one. Her regret is sauce to my soul.
I agree this story make no sense at all, and what the husband did could be considered rape!!!
Yeah, sometimes you try things and they don't work. I might delete this one.