All Comments on 'Le Français Pt. 05'

Moving along nicely, a little slow but still good.

This is spicing up in a great way. The anticipation is building. Easy five stars

I love the intricate games going down on several different levels simultaneously. It must be a bitch to write something like this. I really like it and appreciate your writing skills. Thanks

A good story, but there's some so Boomer (for lack of a better work) about thinking identifying the ethnicity of an Asian girl and maybe a sentence in a language she may or may not know puts her under your power like some kind of Rumpelstiltskin story

loving the work you do.

Another nice chapter, thank you BTB.

To the anonymous Boomer commenter below: if you think that the phrase you pointed out is all that went on, either you should spend a little more effort to understand what you are reading or you are just eager to get offended. One of those two takes is, in itself, offense.