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Normally I wouldn't read such a long story on this sight. Loved it from the beginning and can't wait to read the rest.
When I disregard all the spelling errors, structural errors and mixing up of character
names. This is one hell of a story. Thank you.
I've enjoyed your story thus far but one thing that keeps annoying me is your incorrect spelling of 'litter' you keep referring to it as a 'liter' which is actually the American spelling of our unit of measurement a 'litre' it's quite distracting honestly because I keep expecting these women to give birth to a unit of water or something
Although I haven't always liked the plot direction no one can fault your talent at writing .Great job.!
I agree with VoluptuousValkyrie. This is a really good read, as good or better than a lot of the Kindle books. Keep it up please.