All Comments on 'Leaders of the Pack Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
yahhhh

so at first i was confused and had to refresh and read chapter one... can't believe nora is dead can't wait to see what you come up with next... yah...

justadreamrjustadreamralmost 15 years ago
Please please please

Do not leave us hanging that long again!!! I about had a heart attack when I finally saw an update.

GlosUKGlosUKalmost 15 years ago
:)

Must admit had to go back to read Ch1 and still was a little confused but will go back over the previous story and try to catch up :) PJ xx

cantfightfatecantfightfatealmost 15 years ago
Liked it but

I found this chapter jumped around too much for me to enjoy it completely. It didn't have the flow and depth or detail that your work usually does. Even after rereading Chapter 1 and having read Leader of the Pack several times, I still found this chapter confusing. However I'm sure you'll return to fighting form in the next chapter :) Thanks for coming back to this story. I hope you continue to update!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
hurry pls

I'm looking forward to the babies

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
HURRY!!!!

LOVE THIS STORY, PLEASE DONT TALE SO LONG TO COMPLETE.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
great to have you back!

love this story, and was thrilled to see an update.... please post more chapters quickly... waiting to know what happens next!!!

PS - seems like Jenna has done the trick!!! :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Woo-hoo your back!

Looks like there's a new twist. Can't wait to finish the saga.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Oh no!

Nora is dead??!! Oh no! I bet Jenna did it. No-good whore.

IsaboeIsaboealmost 13 years ago
Excellent cliffhangers!

You have a wonderful talent for knowing just where to end. It makes for a literal page-turner and is depriving me of much needed sleep! Thank you :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
wow.

I did NOT see that cliffhanger coming.

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