All Comments on 'Learning Legaleez'

Well written and moved along at a nice pace, hope there’s more of this story to cum

Please keep going! I bet she would look incredible in some stockings.

Not a bad job for first mature story. Can't wait for next chapter. Keep up the good work.

I like where this could be headed! Looking forward to seeing if my prediction is somewhat correct…

blah blah blah, ...... when does the story start?

I think this guy never toted a golf bag in his life. Any caddy worth his salt knows you always walk ahead of the person you're caddying for so you get to the ball before the player does.

Oh no, not another story doled out in tiny bits so you forget the name of the story and wasted your time because you aren't going to read the next tiny little chapter.

Yea. I’m disappointed. You had a nice buildup, but you left us hanging here. I’m totally into this story. Hope you finish it. I’m rating you a 5 on that alone.

This is an interesting appetizer, but unless/until you denote this as Chapter 1, you're stiffing us on the goods.

These comments are very helpful. In the future, I will get to the sex scenes faster. I thought a slow boil was interesting, but the number one rule in anything is "Know your audience."

By the way, I was a caddy when I was 10. Nobody is a good caddy when they are 10. When I got older, I was always in front, spotting the ball and recommending shots.

Hey, great first installment. Great story. You’ve got a great story going!

Good beginning!

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Nice for an appetizer !!

Nice story. AAAAA+++++