by MarshallStaxxx
Really enjoyed this one. The level of detail in the sex scenes was great. I'm always a big fan of lots of messy body fluids. Like to see you tackle a more drawn out seduction. Not a complaint about this story, just a thought for future fun
Your powers of description are well-developed. There were some minor spelling errors, but they didn't detract from the eroticism of the story. Well done!