by thealphamale
Just one chapter and I am already hooked. I’m glad we are in for a slow burn and some excellent character development. 5*
Looking forward too see how this story develops. If it is anything like the others, fun reading time ahead
I like your character development. The story is intriguing so far.
Great story so far. love the characters. Waiting for the next chapter!
A real good start. Will be waiting for the next chapter. I can see this getting hot quickly.
As I posted before you have one hell of a gift with your writings and I enjoy reading them. Looking forward to more. 👍👍
You seem to be off to a good start. Will reserve judgement until I finish the series.
man I found this story to be good, I like that you didn't just jump into sex but shared some feelings, that's even hotter
There is no question that you, dear Author, can write erotica. What this series, this novel, shows is that you're equally gifted at writing the lit too. What a delightful read, start to finish.