by Scorpio44a
Great Start. The Characters are alive and full of life. Lifes challenges will be a test but this has the makings of a great novel and Kudo's for your time and talent. Will be looking forward to your next installment.
Typical for you. A wonderfully written story. I don't always agree with your ideas, but you do a great job with stories. Keep up the good writing.
Your stories make me cry, they make me smile, they even bring a laugh or two. This story was loving, poignant, and tender... and i loved the ease with which You changed the characters to lovers, potential mates, and a loving family in the truest sense of the words.
i cried at the loss of Faith and of Mike as it brought back memories of my own late mother's passing all those years ago. i have always liked the way You write. Your stories touch each reader differently... in many ways and on many levels.
Thank You for Your stories... Thank You for You.
description of parent/son or daughter incest that I have ever found that is both tasteful and makes some sense; although the Melissa-Karen relationship developed a bit too abruptly...
I agree with one of the other commentors who said this is the first incest story that made sense to me.
Just want to add my voice to others and note that your stories are among the best written most literate and erotic that I found so far in Lit. Prolific too! Thanks.
What happen to Amy? You know 4 months pregnant, getting married, new father-in-law with the large frown on his face at the alter?