by m_storyman_x
One of the worst submissions it's ever been my misfortune to see
This entry could be a lot better. I love the premise, but it needs more structure--it's not very hot.. and where is the judge?
I found this story to be hot and sexy. Great job and good luck in the contest.
Great story with ridiculous plot. I would really like to se more of this.
Great story, seriously hot. Would love to read about what might happen in that lingere shop later.
great scenario and scene.. a bit rushed and short in a way, but a truly hot fantasy with much meat to it. Thanks
This story is not set in a nudist town or city and it is just too weird for a decent score.
Only issue is you seemed to have misplaced the Judge but other then that great scenes.