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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Summer Heat

Hot, Hot, Hot

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Utter rubbish

One of the worst submissions it's ever been my misfortune to see

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
It falls short

This entry could be a lot better. I love the premise, but it needs more structure--it's not very hot.. and where is the judge?

PrincessErinPrincessErinalmost 15 years ago
Sexy

I found this story to be hot and sexy. Great job and good luck in the contest.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
MORE!!!

Great story with ridiculous plot. I would really like to se more of this.

Cristmas_GothCristmas_Gothalmost 15 years ago
Loved it!!

Great story, seriously hot. Would love to read about what might happen in that lingere shop later.

hongluobohongluoboalmost 15 years ago
very hot

great scenario and scene.. a bit rushed and short in a way, but a truly hot fantasy with much meat to it. Thanks

don87654don87654over 14 years ago
Weird....

This story is not set in a nudist town or city and it is just too weird for a decent score.

gara5289gara5289about 8 years ago

Only issue is you seemed to have misplaced the Judge but other then that great scenes.

S_FoxS_Foxabout 1 year ago

Crazy story, deserves no more than * *

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I love the outdoors, fishing, hunting , boating, photography, writing and of course SEX ! I have a fertile mind of ideas and have written many of them in my stories here. After 40+ years of marriage and raising a family I'm ready to live some of those fantasies, even though...

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