All Comments on 'Legally Binding Ch. 04'

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Jaydean409Jaydean409over 2 years ago

Love it!!!!!! Don't listen to the critics, this is great. The more perverted, the better, of course, that's just me!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great, now he is actually screwing around with her livelihood and professional reputation. She's not showing strength of submission but spineless submission. He's done zero to earn trust and quite a bit to demonstrate thoughtlessness. I refuse to believe a good writer cannot include sane actions and responses and still maintain the thrill.

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