All Comments on 'Legend of Lexi'

Really liked this one thank you

Good god you write the best sibcest stories on the entire internet.

Liked how that built - once you see how the sister is when she finally let go you pick up a lot of earlier hints better & some rather abrupt jumps make a little more sense ( or it could be that I'm just dense ), and of course it tickled a few of my kink points along the way. I always love the warmth many of your stories just radiate too. I'd actually like to read this from her POV too, doing both sides of the same story might be a nice experiment one day.

https://xarthwritesthings.wordpress.com/2019/05/10/legend-of-lexi/

Really hope my link doesn't break this time. Probably what Zelda thinks too :P

Anyway, yeah, a few little thoughts available on my blog at the above address. Thanks for reading and hopefully enjoying.

-X

It's well developed idea, this gentle escalation and play-pretending. A very original take on the usual sibling story. Plus it features Zelda. Win!

Amazingly sexy snarky dialogue. Brilliant!

very good, please do more of this story

A sib incest must read..great...

God damn, I red this throughout the day and ended up cumming like 6 times. Oops!!😂😂😂

Fucking lost it with laughter at this line. xD

"Maybe not right here, but I possess the mystical power of locomotion."

I like this story very much indeed, but something feels different about it compared to your other stuff. It's less... cozy, I guess? I think it's because the sexuality is so much forward compared to, say, Sleeping With Ellie. Usually sex is the climactic event in your stories, no pun intended, but in this one it comes in early and just keeps going (I'm not doing it on purpose, I swear).

Still another fantastic story, and a perfect 5/7 from me.

Loved the build up and dialog! Hoping there is a sequel to this soon 😍

Simply one of the best stories I have ever read on here. Loved the slow build, the playfulness, and the sex. Truly believed they cared for each other as much as they enjoyed the sex. Really, really enjoyed.

Sensational story.

Totally erotic build-up and the early exploration of her ass was just delectable.

Great writing!

Excellent job with the conversations. You conveyed both the feel of the moment and the depth of the relationship with minimum words. Brought to mind Robert B. Parker’s Spenser novels.

So so sexy thank you! Lovely horny story!

Just wanted to say I love this story, can you build up the suspense like this in your other stories too? Maybe around different family members and different situations???

Another commendable effort - 5 stars plus.

A lot of other "so called" writers on this site could well take a lesson from you.

Look forward to you next one.

WOW what a hot sexy story. Loved it and hope you will tell us what happens next. How do they plan to be together?

Loved the buildup, the banter and the interaction. Obviously I love the erotic aspects because I'm here, but you took the time to develop the characters and the story. Well done

I really like how you portraited them and their relationship both as siblings and lovers and that built-up is amazing, I also loved them goofing around and early ass play great story

You are the MASTER OF USELESS DETAILS. What is it, do you get paid by the letter?

That was one hell of a story, not to crazy sex wise but still hot hot.

I loved every bit of this story! I've said that about most of your stories and mean it every time. You make the characters come alive and use just as much physical description as is necessary. Thank you for making my day! And my week!

Your are my favorite writer on this site. I get little excited when I see that you have posted something and try to plan out my day to have alone time to lay down and read it. I’m currently camping with my family right now and woke up earlier this morning to touch myself while reading this in full. Your stories are thought out and well written and it makes it all the more believable. I think I could read anything you write in any category and still get turned on by it. I was soaking wet touching myself this morning and I’ve been thinking about what I read on and off all day and had to come back to comment about it. Thank you for another amazing read and I can’t wait for more.

But lost its headway halfway through. Became repetitive between them. Ok in real life with actual time between bantering, but in a story it piles high.

This was extremely hot. My first story from you, but certainly not the last

This was amazing! Glad you put out a regular sibs story!

The best sister stories here include a great buildup isntead of starting off with the slam-bam-banging-my-siser schtick that others do. Really nice, realistic approach.

Xarth simply does this kind of story better than anyone else. No competition.

I can imagine that really happening

A very sexy and touching story! Enjoyed every word. Pacing was just right for the length of the story. Thank you!

I love the way you describe the almost playful atmosphere for these two siblings as their play intensifies and their relationship becomes more serious.

Could have had more variety of seeing when they had sex. Could have done it in the kitchen, living room, and the parent's bedroom while the parents were away. Would have also liked the use of toys for more variety.

I have enjoyed your stories over the years. This one was just as good if not better!

Maybe a chapter about mum joining in?

I found it a rather intense and cute story. Really great! All the sex was good but their relationship was the real heart-warmer.

Long time user of Literotica (first time actually creating an account), and created an account just for this story. It was nice and lengthy, and paced just right.

This was, by far, the best story I’ve read on this site. Right amount of love, tension, build up, and eventually satisfaction. It was kinky without being vulgar, which isn’t a bad thing, just wouldn’t have fit this story. I am REALLY hoping for additional chapters.

Hi Xarth, this is great story, thank you for this. Are you anyhow up for writing it from the sister point of view? Thanks.

Great writing. Really enjoyed the characters and their interactions, it felt very real. Thanks for this, you're very good at what you do.

This story was great, nice build up, even greater reward and loved the whole story from start to finish. I truly hope you continue on this adventure because I and I'm sure many more would gladly read each new chap/story you wrote with these two.

This is genuinely the best story I’ve ever read on this website

Lovely story. So so arousing. I would love to hear it told from Lexi's viewpoint.

this was the most amazing story i’ve ever read on this website. from the reluctance at the beginning to the aftercare to the sneaking around... it was the perfect build-up to an amazing story. i got off twice reading this in the first five chapters and ended up reading the rest just for fun because of how absorbed i was. kudos, man. 5/5.

Very enjoyable story.

One small criticism, however, is that it wasn't very believable. Carrying on recklessly like that is going to get you caught with an observant mom. My mom once told me that she knew who was up at night, me or my sister, because my sister walked like a cow, making loud footsteps, while I walked around quiet as a mouse. Yeah, I thought I was being sneaky, going to raid the fridge, late at night. Also just thought it would be rude to wake people up, and yet, even being as quiet as possible, mom still knew I was up, knew it was me, and knew what I was up to.

Mom's are also not likely to never walk in to her kid's bedroom, when they are in there, awake, with the door closed. The odds that she would catch the daughter in there, with no bottoms on...yeah, very likely.

Anyway, long story short, I don't think this story needed the sneaking around behind the parent's back, to be this good. I think I would have written it that mom and dad moved a few states away, because dad got a promotion. The house had been in the family for several generations, and was NOT going to be sold. Kids are in college, so they stayed behind, in the house. So no need to sneak around. This is in fact, more the way they were acting...as if the parents simply aren't in the picture.

Would also allow the sex to be more hot in the story. Like when he sneaks into her room, and is fucking her, and he doesn't finish so quickly...they can then just have noisy sex, with no worries. Eventually they would just use one bed.

One of the best love stories I’ve read on the site.

The banter was excellent. Great work!

Please please please do a sequel to this story! I haven't loved anything on lit like this in forever!

Beautifully written and amazing

Very fun, great dialogue between the siblings, nice descriptions of their exploration and enjoyment. I appreciate that you didn’t indulge in stilted and humdrum comments about giant breasts or a huge cock, instead you left it to our imagination which is where it should be. Delightful, and I look forward to reading more of your stories.

Loved it, truly beautiful adorable and grounded story!

The dialogue of the characters was very consistent, as were their reactions. Not typical erotica reactions calmer, more measured and reserved - but totally believable because of their consistency.

Great, great story. Enjoyable start to finish. I liked having to fill in a lot of the blanks about who this couple were as you didn't clutter things up worrying about hair color and other parts of their life's, the whole story was about their growing connection to each other.

Thanks for writing this.

Probably the best story ever on this site, and you're definitely the best writer here! Others have already commented on the wonderful pacing, the delightful and literate dialogue, and all of those things. I'd just be repeating other people if I were to expatiate on what a great story this is. I hope you're making a bundle on your "other" writing career; I'd love to know your other pseudonyms so I could follow you in other genres.

-Only incels will find this amazing.

-Written with a happy-go-lucky, high school level quality that makes me think you were drinking lots of talkative-coffee when you sat down to key this.

-You're an overrated, but consistent writer on this website.

I've read quite a few here... but I'll always come back to Lexi!

I like how your conversation feels natural, not contrived or forced. I really like this piece, have read it several times.

I'll keep it short and sweet, easily one of my favorites I've read here. I'll be back to this story for sure..

What a question whether tis better a single shot or one of a salvo may be a question for others but as a tale twas awesome. I found myself loving Lexi almost as much as Aiden does should there be a conclusion or is this enough some words from our author may be helpful here.

FIVE STARS had to be.

This story lends so much to continuation and more family secrets. Great story.

This is written with so much love and sensibility it took my breath away. Thank you very much. I espacially enjoy that you don't described the physical features of your protagonists - because these aren't of any importance and leave so much room for the imaginaton of your increasingy dedicated readers. Jesus, you are good!

What a wonderful, slow-building, playful, believable romance. You never described anyone, but I picture Lexi perfectly and love that girl!

You can feel the personality of Aiden and Lexi as they move along their journey. Brilliantly done.

DAMN, SON. One of the best I’ve read on here, wish I could give it more than five stars.

This is by far one of the best and longest I have red on here. And reading this made me cum so many times

This is the best sibling incest story i’ve read on this site, right up there with “Words on Skin.” You have a great ear for natural-sounding dialogue, with that perfectly snarky, sarcastic flavor that siblings develop. The progression from curious, hesitant pushing of boundaries to actual sexual acts was really believable, and teasingly drawn-out just enough to be stimulating and gratifying, building up erotic tension perfectly. Here’s to secret girlfriends ❤️

This was so delicious that I made myself break it into three seperate reads just to savor it! Here I am, after a morning nap (couldn't sleep last night) just finishing it as my wife is walking down the hall to get popcorn out of the microwave; she's taking a work from home day, so occasionally in and out of her office.

Didn't keep me from holding the tablet in one hand and stroking my swollen cock with the other till the end! Very annoying having to take my hand off to advance the page ;)

I love their open, honest relationship from the very beginning! Loved the realism of both their natural horniness, none of that nonsense hesitation, regret, avoidance bullshit in so many stories that just doesn't feel as real (and loses any novelty after EVERYONE has done it a million times!)

I wonder if they will be secretly married 'spinsters' after conveniently moving to another state, hehe. Sister living with brother after accidentally getting knocked up by some 'guy'. ;)

Always fun to dance the story further in your head! Great story, great ending! I'd say "You've done it again!", but that gets old after a while, hehe, so instead, "Please do it again, and again!!"

Always a fan, even though the wait is patiently long between stories!

Whether you pen a follow up or not (I selfishly vote 'yes' because this was so good) this was a perfect sister/brother incest story. The relationship was deep and loving. The tentative exploration and tension was artfully crafted. As hot as the sex was, the framework of their desire and love for one another is what makes it work.

Well done, though I'm jealous of your writing skills!

Brilliant, sweet, loving and sexy!

Tell me there will be a follow up?!?!?!

page 5 finished me :))

Absolutely one of your best. The interplay between Aiden and Lexi was just perfect. You could believe it was real. I didn't want it to end.

I loved the innocence of the story. I loved the story line with Lexi going into Aiden's room to play his Nintendo every morning but with the motive to encourage him into a relationship with her and dressing in very few clothes until Aiden reaches a point where cannot hold back from touching her and seeing her as something more than a sister. One point in the story Aiden and Lexi's mother comments to Aiden that Lexi could have had her own Nintendo rather than going into Aiden's room all the time to play on his one. It's obvious at this point that Lexi had some sort of plan to get closer to her brother.

I'm torn between wanting another chapter to the story to see where their relationship goes and just being happy with how the story ends now. The current ending helps to keep the innocence of the story as the siblings don't have to deal with the reality of their relationship, their parents finding out etc.

Just a beautiful story.

Well, you have made my day, this story was so well done. It was also so easy to read, well it's now on my top 20 list. What's next for LEXI, the title said LEGEND??.

This story so far has no legend.

Where do these beautiful people come from they are just the best the way you observe them the commentary on their lives and relationship, just superb it really is a shame the way that reality intrudes when we reach the final full stop. I think their relationship should be allowed to stay where we left it. Although we can't be loving teenagers forever sadly.Just perfect.

Well-done! This is one of the best stories I've ever read on Lit. The relationship, dialog, characters, situation, and sex were all wonderfully realistic, a joy to read. I can only hope you will soon write a sequel, dealing with the obvious unresolved issues of curious parents, no mention of birth control, and their increasing risk-taking.

Was great with the slow buildup. until the anal licking fixation. That was a big turnoff for me.

Not interested, I'm not gay.

that Anonymous "Anal? Not interested..." also isn't interested in having a woman play with his dick or eat it, lest he be thought gay.

Or maybe he doesn't want to think about anal because he, himself, is an asshole.

I never read long stories - 2 pages is fine, three at a push- but I couldn’t stop reading this. A brilliant slow build up to the naughtiness made for such sexy reading. Had me hard from beginning to end.

Well written Xarth, great build up, sexy and passionate!

Very well written, very good grammatically too.

It's nice to see another New Englander

Really got into your tale of incest :)

Ive added it to my fave stories & authors yea 👍🏽

Only thing was "rents were never much about yea n must sleep so deep as not here anything n what about dirty laundry, cummy knickers plus bedding musta got messed up too and then the smell ?

Anyway, 5* story right there innit yea ❤️

Truly is one of the best stories I've read

Amazing story i usually cant read long one 1-2 pages max but this one was an exception

Amazing

I would looovvveeee a part 2 please

Would love to see chapter 2!

Damn good story, i like it very much. 5 stars is not enough.

Kind regards

vonLassen.

What a great story with amazing descriptions, believable characters, and plenty of sexy times.

This is by far the best story I’ve ever seen on this site, I plan on reading all of the author’s work

Gah this is the best thing I’ve read maybe ever!

I’ve not been in the mood for dirty stories for a while. God I’m glad I chose this one when I came back. Inspirationally filthy romance... romantic filth.

Xarth, thank you for this story. I think you did a really good job of playing with free use/b&i without it getting too rapey. I'd love to see a similar story between extremely close friends, but this is the story you've given us, and I liked it a lot. Super hot. Mentioned it by name in my gratitude journal. <3

I can relate to Aiden, as I’ve been in his shoes with similar tempting situations...

Great read, keeping memories fresh...

Of course it had to be you! I have read all your submissions in the past, I thought, until I read this one. Didnt see the author's name till the end, when I was wondering who had written such a fantastic, slow burn, incest story. Then I read your name, and I understood. Another fine yarn, spun by a superb crafter of tales! Well done! For me, as it is my favorite genre, it was orgasmic... aaaahh! 5* for sure.

Such a good story. Well written and enjoyable.

My lawd was that steamy, fantastic story!

That was truly the sexiest most romantic story I've read. Wish there was a chapter 3 where the get caught and accepted by the rents. Even possibly them revealing that they are sibs or cousins. Could even have a scene where they all have sex while watching TV.