by archibael
I'm not usually into mind-control stories or stories involving stocking fetishes, but you've got a good combination humor and strong story-telling skills. I'll have to look through some of your other stories to see what I've missed!
Wow! A fabulously erotic story! Loved the slow, seductive build up and the beautifully detailed descriptions of her outfit... Would love to read another installment with the added focus of sexy stiletto-heeled pumps - That would be amazing! Hope you do it!
The build up was great on this one...and the seduction...I really enjoyed this one and would love to read more about how Denise takes the ball and runs with it...
this story is just so good, it made me so hot reading it, i love this story like other mind controling ones cause i just wish i could be controled like denis, fantastic, would like to talk to you if you dont mind.
rudechick69@hotmail.co.uk - thats my email
Tamaryn xx
Thanks for this, the most enticing thing i have read on here amazing job thanks for the read
Waouhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The most incredible storie i ever read.....
I would love to see it in a film!!!!!
If i could i would rate this storie not 5 but 10, 20,.....
i do not normally like mind control but do investigate it to see if there is anything good to read and this was worth reading. Enjoyed it a lot, particularly the light hearted style of writing.
I never read a story as good as this one. Want to read always this......
I heard about it someplace, but now I realize there really is a lesbian conspiracy, to make the world less deadly and more intimate. So this is the way the lesbian mistresses gain followers! I can only follow. My mind is already controlled!
Absolutely loved this.
Stockings and mind control are two of my favorites, and I vividly imagined Kathleen in her lovely outfit.
Read it at least once a week and it never gets old.
That was a very original and well written story of seduction. Food for the libido!
Now I'm having fantasies about my wife meeting Kathleen or Denise and being taught about the last line of the story.
such a hot, well written story, this was tole in a way, that could actually happen. another chapter would be awesome, in this same erotic style. four stars