by silkstockingslover
Your stories are the same. Same tired dialoge, unclever dialogue, absurd scenarios etc...
All build-up, no payoff. It's like you can't write sex scenes any more! You spent three excellent pages building up to the seduction and submission, and then casually flipped off a few paragraphs detailing how it went down. What's worse is this isn't the first time. Do you No longer enjoy writing a full story? Are you knocking out too many for page views and limes? I'd personally prefer one story a month provided said story had a full scope to it. Please, go back to writing the way you did a few years back.
Did you know that Christine Nguyen, is actually an adult actress? No reason behind the question. Was just curious.
Thought it was a good story. A little different in that Christine actually stood up to Bree.
I do still disagree with the mentality "A Mistress doesn't eat pussy". A Mistress does whatever she wants to do that pleases her. That being said, I understand that this mentality is a part of the character development.
I think that it would be more interesting if Bree lost sometimes. I would love to see Bree get the table turned on her sometime or even become the prey of another Mistress. Maybe cross paths with a Mistress from one of your other stories like the one about the two different Domm's. Or maybe it's time to get the little sister but little sis is the one to turn the tables on Bree.
only the no-name comments are negative, funny how that works, I really love your stories, even tho they sometimes repeat a similar submission. but I keep reading because I love the seduction and submissive themes you write about. five stars.
Another great victory for bree and another great story from you keep up the amazing work
Every time I think I have read the best episode in the Bree saga, you put out a new one that is even better than the one before. I had dropped a suggestion to you a while ago to have one of these take place in a spa, where Bree turned one of the workers. It looks like I wasn't the only one to mention this (I see you mentioned Jedd as your inspiration)...and not only did you deliver, you delivered with probably my favorite of your stories - and I like a lot of your writings. Thank you!! :-)
I think the title says it all. One thing though, I think it'd be cool to see Bree's mother again, seeing Bree as a sub after serving her mother for so long.
But when is Bree going to get a chance at her little sister? Or maybe baby sister gets Bree. That would be a fun twist.
Please can you write more about Bree. I really love this series and I want to read more about Bree.
320. What a turnaround! What an imagination. Yours. So many people to keep track of with their own characteristics. So many different situations. I would prefer less blackmail it does enable Bree to be shown as the Domme in many situations.