by GettingItDone
This ending is kinda bad for me. All the excitement throughout the story and in the end no any exposure. Im not really connected emotionally to any of your character (Cynthia and the others) to care about them or their future. I just want to see them exposed after a long and nasty journey.
For me the best ending by you is still what you did with Erica. (even tho you got a lot of hate for it from justice warriors) But happy ending has no meaning in these kind of stories.
I really hope that we going to see a new character in your new story. (who is not connected to any of the previous ones)
Good luck
It was a great idea of using collar dickie, if you had written it as a regular chapter & then ended it, it have earned 5 star
I would like more eather on both are put the 2 together with a new master or mistress maybe a couple i would love to see them both pushed on more nude outside of school and in class room games maybe a student couple more please !
I hated what you did to Erica but this was OK. Looking forward to reading more of your stories. Thanks