All Comments on 'Lessons in Lust'

This was a good story, but there were a ton of grammatical errors. You frequently use "him" or "his" instead of "her" (and vice-versa), and much of the time your conversation resembles pre-school babble. If these were fixed, I'd rate it higher.

Pure perverted delight. Loved every word of it.

Don't worry about the grammar too much, you are a hell of a lot better than many. This was incredibly hot. You had me creaming by the second page and then held me to the fire the whole way through!!

Thanks, bring on more!!

that was quite superb. but get him fucking mom with dad's permission ... maybe get her pregnant even .. but that could come later. carry on the good work

How many of us as young men would have benefitted from someone like his mother to show us the ropes. Hot and horny yet sensitive as well. Well done

i truly enjoyed the whole story start to finish. please keep up the good work

This story is smoking hot! thats all i can say! SMOKING HOT!

wonderful story and character development. thanks for a great read and cum. like your other stories also.

Brilliant, great construction, characters are believable. Just loved it, loved it. Aint been so hard from a story for years. Well done.

Gary G.

mind blowing, come up with the new eposide of the same storie.

This is a very erotic...hot story...give us Ch. 2 and many more !!!

A fan of erotic stories.

Wow...It is very nice hot hot story ever i read......Damn good it is....I expect next chapter also...But i want morething that impreg his mother Rebecca by his own son...I will expect this in the next chapter of this story...Damn good it is.

LOVED YOUR STORY AS IT BROUGHT BACK MANY FOND MEMORIES...

What an erotic scene description. Unbelievable.

Would love to read one where father joins in. Looking forward to all your stories.

damn it was good . its the best i have read in a while great descriptions . keep it up

It was great loved all the detail and the best was the teaching of the mom to her son. if more mother would do that for their sons we would all be great with our women. PS more please

I really enjoyed this story. It's got all the right ingrediants, a fucking hot, slut-milf mother with huge tits who enjoys fucking a big cock, a very horny son and a willing cuckold in the father who appreciates his wifes need for cock. It's also got some good anal action too. Well done indy_pop , a good read.

I read your story over and over.never gets old.

Obviously English not your native language. Still somebody should

have taken the time and effort to edit your manuscript.

Thought that may be true about him/her, the story was still great and I had multiple turn-on's.

I might be thinking about creating an account and adding Indy to my favorites as I have been fascinated with 3 of his stories so far.

Keep them coming, and you should try out series as well! :3

Fantastic story!

I was apprehesive at first, being mother, father, son, but became quite intriqued the way the entire story played out. I think a sequel is in order, with dad being discovered and it becoming a threesome.

Now on to some constructive critisim: You definitely need to re-read your stories before submitting them. You have a habit of describing a situation, and confusing people. For example: she took his .....into his mouth, or he placed his hand over his mound.

Watch that. Otherwise an erotic story of very high quality! Keep writing!

since English is not your native language you need the help of a proofreader. it is really frustrating to have to go back and reread the previous text to figure out what you were saying. her cock?

Hot!

Rye and Ginger

Why wasn't the husband included in bedroom? They could have spit roasted Rebecca or dp'd her. There is definitely a need for a chapter 2.

Grammar can come later , the bottom line is ,I had a beautiful sweet orgasm at the point he's licking her out . Very well done , thank you

The premise of this story was great. The plausibility rating, very high. The grammar, not so good. You've heard it all before, so I won't beat a dead horse. You have great story lines. Great continuity and structure. But everytime I get to a point in the story where I want to rub one out I come to a misspelling or misuse of a word. Its annoying as hell. I know you are a better writer. Stop proofing your own work and get an editor, or change the one you have. 4 stars...barely.

Your story kept my old cock rock hard throughout. I had almost as tough a time not cumming as Kevin did! I found it heart-warming that Dad got to eat his wife's and son's cream pie as well as enjoy some scorching voyeuring.

Thanks for the great story!

ryeandgingerayle2@yahoo.ca

Very well done. Thanks.

Great story I want my wife to fuck our son .

I gave your story a 4. This is why. The storyline is fine, but in SERIOUS need of editing!!!!! The errors were almost enough to make me quit. I did not stop, but it was challenging. Try again.

Loved it, very hot