All Comments on 'Lessons Learned'

I loved both parts a great story sorry to see it end!!!!

sorry to see it end my wife and i loved it

Sorry to see it end, but great ending! I got all chocked up. Good tearjerker.

Your stories are good for my soul. the commitment to love and perservierance is heartwarming and appreciated.

This story is beautifully written and incredibly sexy. I enjoyed every word. You are a fantastic writer!

I love the way you tell a story. I have place you on my favorite writers list.

I am so glad they ended up together! This story is beautifully written and so sensuous. I loved it!

Wow, such a well written story!

Thank you!

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I was so sad when Melissa broke it off with Kayla just to appease her mother's expectations of her. It made me shed some tears but then Melissa came to her senses! Yay. I love a happy ending.

Just like joy4me this story filled me senses with emotion. I was happy for the love they found and sad when Missy cowered to her mother. I too cried as I read this. Thankfully her father stepped up. I was again thrilled at the outcome and the sexy way the Missy came back into Kayla's life. I would love to read a sequel and find out how they are doing since getting back together

I can see Kayla getting back with Melissa, but not that quickly. After all, that *was* the second time Melissa did the awkward breakup. It's also unclear how Melissa got such am elaborate costume that quickly. Lastly, I sort of wish you could sprinkle a bit of "real life" between the frequent sex scenes, which I do enjoy. It would humanize then a bit more. But, this is definitely a very good story. Thank you.

The future of this relationship is going to depend almost entirely on one thing: Kayla's teaching ability.

Missy is simply too immature for any sort of long term relationship; she herself said she does not know what she is doing, not exactly an endorsement of herself to Kayla. Kayla, on the other hand, is young and blindly optimistic. But despite her age, she seems to know orders of magnitudes more about relationships than Missy does, even though her past might not indicate that.

They will break up again. Missy is too weak. What happens when someone at the school finds out? She'll run again. It'll be years before Kayla can teach her how to be truly happy with herself in all circumstances.

So, if Kayla can be patient, repeatedly welcome her back from her panic attacks, and teach her along the way, they might have a chance. And that *would* be kind of cool because ...

... how cliché would it be for two elementary school teachers to end up growing old together?

Bloody good story. Slightly disjointed flow with incongruous interludes of sex but a great underlying tale. Might look for another one from you.

Found the second part and it's as good or better than the first! Thank you!

Is a part three possible?

The 2nd part was not anywhere near the first part you hurt the story by bringing in the guy for a threesome which took you off the story line which was romance with lesbian sex and you didn't give yourself enough time to get back on track properly before you decided to make a grown woman into a child yet again and letting her mother control her life then you brought more guys into the mix before bringing back the other girl in a make up situation and @okami1061 is right the way you made the Missy character out too be vs the Kayla character they can't stay together there is always going to be a situation that will arise and this Missy chick will run again you probably would have been better off leaving them apart and you definitely would have been better off leaving the guys out of the story all together the first part I gave 4 stars this part its a 1 there was too many things in this story that killed the mood of the story and you couldn't fix the mood in the amount of pages that the story in a whole was written in