by Optimator
I think these are the best stories I have read in a very long time. You are a great writer.
That was a really really great story. A wee bit weird maybe but great. Nice story development and character development. and no typos thank God i hate typos see it alot sigh
"Outstanding" and his mystery woman OUTSIDE of the mall has this story up to 200 & I wonder where the 2nd part will take me?
Good story...first story that I actually spend time to write comment...thanks for the read.