All Comments on 'Let's Play a Game'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Very good

As I have written before, most men have been so conditioned into hetrosexuality that they need something quite shattering to realize their true desires. Some people might think this liberation is cruel, and the narrator’s sadism is gratuitous. But this level of deprogramming is quite necessary, so the narrator’s appetite is completely appropriate. Anyway, a beautiful cock is it’s own justification. The lad will soon be quite grateful.

ticklishsolesticklishsolesover 4 years ago
Interesting

I have not had any experience such as this but it makes me want to avail myself to an intruder who will take me and do to me what he desires.

Ticklishsoles

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
My Favourite

I love this story. I really hope there will be a part 3. The author really knows how to set the scene and when he gets to fuck his captive, it always makes me want to cum. My only slight disappointment is the relatively small paragraph devoted to fitting his captive's chastity cage and sounding rod, I would have liked the author to have devoted more of the story line to portray the act of inserting the rod and fitting the cage and maybe his captive struggling to accept it. But, that is just my opinion, it is still an excellent story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Great

Enjoyed this very much one of my favorites

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
One of my favs

Hot story, deserves higher ratings.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
An Agreement

The Gentleman who discussed the necessity to deprogram straight males in a somewhat harsh way is entirely correct. Only some old myths and mores stay them from the stark realization that....sex feels good. The way it's done may vary, indeed it should vary, but, en fin, sex feels good. Once they've accepted that, they are faced with the altogether pleasant task of finding just what sort of sex they will enjoy the most....the wise will take some little while and may experiments to discover that.

Really, our hero is simply giving Matt the 'crash course', saving him the bother of weeks, perhaps months, years of eventually realizing what I've said about sex and how it feels.

What an entertaining way to watch lessons taught, so clever, so, finally, correct. One does hope that Matt, at some point, realizes how grateful he should be even if, on the moment, it might not seem so. As with food, one doesn't like everything the first time you eat it.

4yourpleasureiam4yourpleasureiamabout 4 years ago
Yessssssssssss

I want to be caught and used like this Take all my choices away make me nothing but a sex toy use me, make me scream make me cry but get your joy in using me Please PM me

ticklishsolesticklishsolesabout 4 years ago
Oh. My. God.

This has been my ultimate fantasy, To be taken, movement severely restricted and made to sexually perform.

Ticklishsoles.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
holy damn

that was amazing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
This has to be one of the best kind of rough fuck/non consensual/forced erotic stories

And I loved every minute of it. And it's not in just the specific words you've chosen to make it come alive but the affectiveness, tone, and the kidnappers charisma and charmpop out. From the beginning I was hooked on how you not only fit in all the steps to make this game a careful and thought out one but also when you come back later in the story to make those safe choices matter a lot. it's very cleverly thought out. Like this guy isn't you're ordinary kidnapper that sees some booty, get it, then just head out from there. Nah you're main antagonist physically wise is your standard kind of hunk you'd see in a sorry like this but what makes it stand out is the very way he stays sure of himself, keeps calm and collected, like he is and always was suppose to be in control of every situation. He's like a super intellictually sex driven lil devil. The only one bad thing I'd have to say about it is make the boy character, of course kept like a su,b that will soon learn to love his place or at least make an add on to this sort of story to make the audience reading feel like the kid really doesn't like it. Keep all the resistance about him but would be even more enjoyable if let's say the kid has been caught in a lie just by his body behavior such as I don't know because he can't speak let his body behavior to what he's going through make him become n honest character. Like you could have a scene where the kid actually likes it a bit because the guy notices a little hard on and make him drag it out for a while teasing him about "all this time and I thought you didn't like me" *evil smirk* just saying I'm a bottom and I know that you can still be able to get hard in a chastity cage just wont be able to get it up fully. To be honest though, everything is perfect already about this just by the way you get me. Haha. I'd want a too of mine to do crazy bat shit insane things like that to me of course I'd like it but would I'd rather be screaming out "please no don't stop"? Hell yea and I'd do it genuinely so to show my top I'm fully committed to the art or role of total dumb bimbo bottom bitch

Dratini2011Dratini2011about 3 years ago

Where is the second part?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Horny reading this want to be bound face down on a bed spreadeagled used as a bitch.Want to see me beg catchthefirststone1@gmail.com I need it so badly masters

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I creamed reading this.A spent virgin guy's arsehole is the most ! Did you get to see the damage? A puffy virgin arse is stupendous !!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Loved your story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Lost me when the top cheated at his game. Said a toy will be added each time, then added two at once with no running attempt in between. Otherwise, great story.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Loved this!

UKGuy111UKGuy1114 months ago

Loved the story and the control over the victim

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

I keep coming back to this story because it’s one of the few TRULY nonconsensual works I can find. The rape feels real the entire time. Very well written and I love how the narrator’s a total asshole to our poor victim.

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