All Comments on 'Library Check Out'

very good I loved seeing it big time!!!

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Good story. Could have elaborated a little more on how the two decided to get married, but even without that it’s a very good story. Thanks for it.

Good story, but you ended it too quickly. Should have gone on more about their dating, did she move to Chicago? Did he go with her? Could have used another page or 2.