All Comments on 'Lie Easy'

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Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 4 years ago
A really very well put together story

This was a pleasure to read.

5 stars, more if I could

WraysburyWraysburyover 4 years ago
I entered a story too

After submitting a story; thought I'd go and read the other entries. Have been really quite disappointed with the quality I found. Until I read yours! It did escalate rather too quickly and continuity confused me momentarily where you wrote "upstairs" instead of "downstairs" at one point, but well constructed, well related and an excellent story! Well done, five stars from me!

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