All Comments on 'Life after Sylvia Ch. 03'

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wheelman53wheelman53about 3 years ago

Much better, I did not care for part 2. I liked the chemistry between him and Crystal.

bsp76bsp76about 3 years ago

loving this series. can't wait for the next chapter to see where it goes

oldsage_1oldsage_1about 3 years ago

About as hot as it gets! Figured something was up when he got the "trust me" "do as I say" treatment! Still lots of options with this fantasy. Wonderful characters, hot sex, smooth story flow, good dialog, well proofed what's not to like about this story. Predict a 4.75 to 4,8 score for this chapter.

5 stars in my book. Keep it cuming! I love this series.

Cheers

SAGE

PS: Three orgasms and only one tip? What a bunch of lady pikers! Shudda walked out of there with at least 500 bucks! Should have stayed on the floor longer.

MormonJackMormonJackabout 3 years ago
Love it... loved the series

Thank you! I look forward to the next "chapter!"

Ravey19Ravey19about 3 years ago
Just Gets Madder

Great story. Love it. Hope they make it together. 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
best chapter yet

Each chapter in Life After Sylvia is better than the one before. Great story telling by one of the sight's most talented writers.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I read the one like this, but about modern day harem. He didn't agree to have threesome with another girl but his girlfriend insist. Then the play continued until he had four girl in his bedroom and they all fell for each others. His girlfriend love him but also fell in love with the second girl. When his girlfriend offered a job hundred miles away, she and the second girl left him. The second girl love him too but love his girlfriend more, so they left him broken hearted. In the end he broke all the contact with the two girl. The third girl left him also because she only searching for excitement. In the end, the fourth girl finally confess to him that she fell for him the first time she met him and waiting for this opportunity to happen, feeling also comfortable at him sexing with another girl. They live happily ever after, have good life and two daughters and grandchilds. No continuation of that story but I hope the exes broke up with each other and feeling regret that they left him because he had been the anchor to unite them both. The conclusion is, sometimes you need to stand up and say no when you are uncomfortable with something on your relationship

FseriesFseriesover 1 year ago

Her trying to prove how it’s not really a thing and also proving it is a thing of a line that is crossed. He has a hang up with her getting excited and the patrons getting excited and physical sexual contact happening, so she’s proving that it’s too difficult to hold back and anything can happen? Funny. She needs to stop or he needs to find someone else.

Comentarista82Comentarista8210 months ago

Problem is the huge double-standard exists where he was screwing anything that moved, while he was having trouble with her stripping and getting touched; both were doing the same thing, except it was "ok" for him to do it as much as he wanted while he was "hung up" on her performing. I admit having him strip to have him experience what she did was novel, but what confused things was all the sex with Donna, Marge and whomever. Other problem is there's only two outcomes: either the guy gets attached to all the partners and can't "love" just one or he has too much sex that it seriously damages his ability to connect with one partner (that's the clinical psychological findings).

Some attempt exists to extricate Crystal from the stripping, but the females hounding Michael (and him not having a spine to say "no" and go exclusive with Crystal) really damages the narrative, because it makes him look like a simp. 3

DwarfLord50DwarfLord508 months ago

I loved the idea of him stripping so he can see the situation from her perspective, only to have it be BOTH of them seeing it from the other side. Very clever. Well done!

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