by save425
I loved every word of this story, and I like the author's style. It is worth every mark I can give it.
Kristen is a woman after my own heart. I empathised with her all the way, and would love to do what she was doing. (In fact, I have already done it!)
Very nice, low-key retelling of what sounds like the real thing. You have a journalistic knack for picking the right details, and bringing out the excitement of the moment. Nicely done. Your wife sounds like a peach!