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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Thank You

Interesting review, appreciate the effort made to aid readers tracking the tale.

FYI: St. John/St. James as arisen as a point of confusion for Hayden's public surname.

Nut Ranch, I believe Ulyssa Reichmann's sister is named around the first date if you wish to continue tracking the cast.

Well Done Final Stand. R/Rock

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
ummmm............

while this is interesting it doesn't advance the story at all.

NWlifterNWlifterover 9 years ago
Anonymous poster

Advancing the story was not the point of this particular post. Had you read beyond the first part of the title that would have become glaringly obvious.

LancerInLALancerInLAover 9 years ago

(In my best Darth Vader voice) Impressive, most impressive.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Ironically...

It does advance the story because we are getting a list of new characters that have not appeared yet and some events that have not happened since chapter 23

Steve150177Steve150177over 9 years ago
For ease of use,

This would have been more useful if it were also arranged in alphabetical order.

That is page 3 is page 1 re-ordered alphabetically.

NutRanchNutRanchover 9 years ago
Cast of Characters.

If you liked it, thank FS. If you don't, blame me. There are many ways to organize this list, I chose to go, roughly, in order of appearance.

Thank you FS for allowing me to have a role in this great story. It is an honor to be associated with it in any fashion.

Nut

txcrackertxcrackerover 9 years ago
Thanks it helps a bunch !

Thanks it helps a bunch ! To F/S for you approval

To Nut your work is greatly appreciated .Keep up the great work .

Thanks

TX Cracker

jasonhawkjasonhawkover 9 years ago

I didn't get lost on your story, but thanks some people mite really needed that info. so please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Katy Lee

Great list. Thanks a lot. One question. Was Katy Lee actually a conquest? Certainly interested but I don't recall her ever having the opportunity to hook up?

FinalStandFinalStandover 9 years agoAuthor
Katy Lee

Poster, you are correct. Katy Lee and Cael have not hooked up yet. I'm wondering about a three-way with Jason-Katy-Cael. Cael would be acting more as an enabler than primary sexual contender. Jason and Katy make a better couple.

gnome_mangnome_manover 9 years ago
Much Gras, Much Gras

Thanks to NutRanch for this. Its a very 'busy' story, and I appreciate your help.

Thanks to FinalStand for your brilliant efforts. I don't know how I used to get through the day without you. I just wish Lit wouldn't post so late in the day. The last three or four episodes have kept me up till 1:30 in the morning!

I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL THE NEXT DAY FOR MY FINALSTAND!!!!

NutRanchNutRanchover 9 years ago
Anonymous You are correct on the Missed characters

Katy Lee was never a conquest, got her confused with the Korean take out delivery girl.

I also missed or accidentally deleted a few names in organizing it (roughly) into order of appearance. If anyone catches them, I will see about fixing my boo boo's.

Nadia Reichmann, Sister to Ulyssa Reichmann: Non Amazon, 1st Named Chapter 7. She is an on again/off again Sunday night hook-up for Cáel.

A few from CH 22-24 were missed as well. I haven't seen CH 25. If we ask real nice maybe FS will add them in the next update. These are only my initial write up's. FS will of course correct/improve them as he sees fit.

Madori: a former 'Runner', House Ishara(?) 1st named in Ch 22

Wilma Draper: Havenstone Security team (NOT S.D.) Amazon ‘Runner’ 1st Named Ch 22

Wiesława: Havenstone S.D., House Živa, Amazon Pure Blood, 1st Named Ch 22

Felicité: Havenstone S.D.(?) Amazon Pure Blood, 1st Named Ch 22

Orlando Keyes: Non Amazon, MMA Fighter sponsored by Jormo Sulkanen’s company 'Fitness Tech', Brennan Sulkanen’s “muscle,” (Deceased along with his un-named Fiancé) 1st Named Ch 22

Brennan Sulkanen: Son of Jormo Sulkanen, Step Brother of Hana Sulkanen, Along with Anima, foolishly initiates a (very short) feud with Cáel by mis-treating Casper after being warned. Oxygen thief with delusions of entitlement due his father’s money. First introduced in Ch 23.

Donna: Servant at the Sulkanen estate, non Amazon, introduced in Ch 23

Sovann Mean (Timothy Denver’s date) Second generation Cambodian-American weightlifter, introduced in Ch 24

Virginia Maddox: FBI Special Agent , Selected by USA Javiera Castello to investigate the attack on Cáel at his apartment by Carrig O'Shea (aka ‘Uncle Lumpy’ ), introduced in Ch 24

Tadêfi: Amazon Augur (Seeress), Pure Blood, House (?) Cáel was directed to have sex with the 1st woman he saw (Tadêfi) by the Goddess Ishara after her communication with him in CH 24.Possibly a future mother of Cáel’s child(?) Introduced in Ch 24

Sikia: Personal Attendant/Guard for the Amazon Augur Tadêfi. Participates in Goddess directed sex between Cáel & Tadêfi. Possibly a future mother of Cáel’s child(?) House? Introduced in Ch 24.

Again, this is FS's story and I appreciate him allowing me to be of assistance. Any oops's are mine. ALL credit goes to him.

FinalStandFinalStandover 9 years agoAuthor
Nut Ranch

BITCH!!! Don't you go stealing my blame now. It's mine, damn it. It is my screw-up and with the way my life is going right now, it is the only screwing I'll be doing. (And thanks again for all your help)

NutRanchNutRanchover 9 years ago
ROTFLMAO!

Too late brother :-) .

Bitch is it? LOL, I'm not from that part of Cali despite where I'm living at the moment.

My tramp stamp would say exit only If I had one ;-)

Thanks again for the previews.

Be well my friend.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Not Finished

I really liked this short novel. However I feel it is not finished. It should continue past the great hunt.

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