Seems the dom character didn't have much dominance or a clue how to transition from one scene to another. The sub was a switch. There is a difference. subs don't question doms. They both need to learn how to work it together.
On occasion I get the writing bug. Starts with just a rough idea or some memories from previous sessions. As I start writing and my imagination spurts out the story, I get turned on and for 3-4 hours I can't stop.