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TSreaderTSreaderalmost 5 years ago
A great start!

Well done! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Good Premise

A solid start! If you continue writing this series, it would be good to delay the gratification a bit longer, and make the reward feel more deserved. It would also be interesting to see what kind of consequences the game has for being too bold. Furthermore, maybe we could learn about the history of the game, and why anyone would want to sell it. Just some food for thought. I’m excited for more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Good Start

Please continue, interesting and satisfying.

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