All Comments on 'Life is a Soap Opera Act 02'

FANTASTIC love story. Ashamed this isn't one of Oprah's book picks. Can't wait for the next episode. Keep them coming.

What a way to leave us .....hanging on while the chills still run through us.

Another fantastic chapter HDL. I can't wait for the next.

Thanks for sharing your talent

I am not sure I'll properly breathe until the next chapter is published. After wading through whips, chains, nieces and uncles, scat and raw pounding lust, this lovely, tender and very hot story was a breath of sweet fresh air. very nicely wrought. Thank you.

gosh darnit! dont leave us hangin!! update PRETTY PLEeEeeez!

I truly would pay money to buy/read your writing! I'm addicted to your stories! I loved being able to read these back-to-back! Please, keep up the amazing work! I look forward to reading your next musings!

just like a good soap opera. I love it!

erm, al gore for the internet and john mccain for the blackberry? that threw me for a loop...if it's an inside joke i'm sorry to have intruded...anywho, great story again! well, off to read the last act :)

As usual; you make them part of my family for awhile

I was disappointed in Gabe when Bailey first flew to NY; he asked her to get herself off - telling her that he'll take "go down on her later", then he teased her at work and leaves her hanging, then they get back to the apt - she says "take me" - whereupon he gets off & didn't do anything for her, so, so sad. She did not orgasm, he did not "go down on her". They cleaned up and went to sleep.

Thanks;

DKP

and I am sorry but details drive me crazy. Let's ignore the homophones. their, there, etc. and skip straight to the silly stuff. 4 young ladies move in to his house. 2 are sisters with a single set of parents for a total of 2 plus 2 = 4. the other 2 each have (presumably) 2 parents each, which is 2 plus 4 = 6, and Gabe = 1. they all get together for dinner and the total number is:

4 young ladies

6 parents

and

1 host, Gabriel

11

yet,

"A little while later, dinner was ready and the thirteen of them sat down to eat."

aaargh!

Gave act 1, a 5. Act 2 got a 2.

Did same person write them both? If so you lost it in between. Act 2 is so miserable that I will not read act 3.

Bye

Please learn to use cliffhangers, only at the end of a complete story. That device is to get us to read the next story. Not the next chapter. Thanks.