All Comments on 'Life on Another Planet Ch. 10-13'

Well thought out, written and presented.

Waitin' for the next chapters!

Will just have to accept young people calling each young man or woman. Try sitting in your local mall and listening to how younguns babble at each other. But then this comment might follow the last one, funny as I am sure it was here just yesterday. Hope some light criticism did not upset anyone too much. Shame because apart from their speech the story is great and am enjoying it immensely.

This piece, which was already good LITerature, became litEROTICA. And in a very good way, with the agressive (but not over-bearing or demanding) Sue. That she is Oriental is a nice plus, for some variety. Also I like sex education stories, so a touch of that was welcome.

So, who's next? Kirsten? Eve? Both? Or....?

Interesting, well-written compelling (ie. attention-getting) tale.

Paul in Oklahoma

Great read as the story continues. 5 stars