All Comments on 'Life on Another Planet Ch. 28-31'

by coaster2

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
To be concluded?

I seriously hope you meant continued??

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
continued ?

Really want to know more please don't conclude

SirCarlSirCarlover 6 years ago
NO! Not concluded!

This whole story, not just this chapter, has very well thought out, written, and presented. Now is not the time to stop.

MrOuchMrOuchover 6 years ago
To be concluded...

This means it will be concluded with the next installment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

coaster2: if you really want to conclude this so you can continue to write other very enjoyable stories, as you have done so many times, then please do so. Too many additional chapters could lead you into trying to explain the unexplainable, which could dilute the effectiveness of the story. As it is, the reader should be able to pleasantly accept the fantasy of a single twist in the reality of time.

Rancher46Rancher46over 3 years ago

And the love story just gets more interesting. 5+ stars

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