by coaster2
This whole story, not just this chapter, has very well thought out, written, and presented. Now is not the time to stop.
coaster2: if you really want to conclude this so you can continue to write other very enjoyable stories, as you have done so many times, then please do so. Too many additional chapters could lead you into trying to explain the unexplainable, which could dilute the effectiveness of the story. As it is, the reader should be able to pleasantly accept the fantasy of a single twist in the reality of time.