All Comments on 'Life on the Farm'

by Schaka

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yummytitties23yummytitties23over 6 years ago
Amazing

Great read..but would have been even better if daddio found out and watched them secretly..being a voyeur and jerking off to what he saw! Loved the story. Thank you...

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
****

This was pretty good. You have lots going for you as a writer but I think you veered over into exaggeration occasionally. That stopped me from awarding 5 stars, though your work is already better than most contributors. Talented guys like you have to adhere to a higher standard, but that's because you can achieve it. A well-told story with good characters, none of them clichés. A stolid good-man father, a voluptuous wife, a son she drives wild. No melodramatic discoveries. A frank acceptance of her need by the mother and her son eager to fill that need whenever he can. Well described sex. No guilt. Good job!

prop69prop69over 6 years ago
Is Caleb a "love child" with Mother and son?

Nice story.

Enjoyed the tenderness between Mother and son as well as the adventure.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Liked the back story of how their sexual relationship began. Would love to read more of their story of then and now.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great story

This was a realistic story and not overly done. Good writing on details. I like to see a continuation of this story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Warmth

I am so surprised that I missed this one for so long. It is a sweet, sexy and loving story. I would love to know how this goes when his wife finds out...

RixusRixusover 2 years ago

Muito bem escrito. Isso diminui bastante as distorçoes de tradução. Bom cenário, bons personagens. Sem pieguismo e sem exageros. Gostei.

Very well written. This greatly reduces translation distortions. Good scenery, good characters. No fussiness and no exaggeration. Liked it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Its good for a mother and her adult son to mate together in my opinion. . Especially when she has hairy bush, its only natural for the son to be attracted to her. A hairy mother's crotch fur is her last, mysterious and womanly line of defense, in that crevice between her big motherly butt curves. Its also a magnet for the son's eyes, and his penis. It gets humid and moist in there, and a son knows instinctively that mother's bush is the source of life, love and happiness. As it was in the Garden, our hero breeds his mother like St. Eve, delighting in the carnal familiarity of maternal flesh. Lovely stuff indeed.

JamokieJamokie11 months ago

Fantastic! Excellent story and writing. Looking forward to your other works.

LonesomeBoy60LonesomeBoy609 months ago

This author writes stories that are very disrespectful to the son's father & her husband. Imagine a wife bringing another man's child for him to raise it's deceitful. The bitch just acts as if its the most natural thing in the world. Bitches ain't loyal.

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