All Comments on 'Life on the Farm Ch. 03-04'

by cincy4fun6

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Frankie1952Frankie1952over 5 years ago
I wonder

I don't recall any mention (I could have missed it though) of Ginny being on birth control. So the future could be quite interesting. Wonderful story and so loving this tale.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Tease

You know Mom wants to try out her boy at least once.

cincy4fun6cincy4fun6over 5 years agoAuthor
Tease

I know right! And dad is almost drooling over his daughter...

prop69prop69over 5 years ago
AWESOME DON'T STOP..

Ginny and Ron need to tell the parents.

Are Marci and Paul siblings?

Remember the COUSINS at home.

Can't wait for the next EPISODE

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Good baseline

I liked the story - mostly. But the writing was a huge anchor to you. Why are so many story owners afraid to get an editor?

worshipper622worshipper622over 5 years ago
Too weird!

What started as a typical "Life on the Farm" story, has turned into an absolute farce. It's beyond fantasy. Couple that with having to reread every other sentence due to grammatical/spelling/gender errors, well, it's a chore to read. Sorry, get an editor or stop writing!

prop69prop69almost 5 years ago
AWESOME story. A family dream where all enjoy.

Each episode is better with love and tenderness.

Looking forward to the next evening.

bshell47bshell47almost 4 years ago
Nice story

Can’t wait for the next chapter.

Hope the parents switch with the kids.

Perfect vacation

tjorgensontjorgensonover 3 years ago

It was alright but as it was written it seemed as if I was back in first grade reading dick and Jane book . sort of, Dick said, Jane said. But beside that a very good plot.

AkpervertAkpervert3 months ago

Still HOT, with potential for HOTTER! I think it's going to happen.

Still no mention of protection. Hmmm, this would have me worried.

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