All Comments on 'Life with the Twins Ch. 01'

It's a good start. Hopefully the twins will be into each other as well as daddy. Can't wait until the next chapter.

Great story, 5*s!

The best thing about incest stories is the long slow build up to the characters crossing that uncrossable line, and your story built on this slow burn to a blazing inferno.

Well done.

The screen porch was large, nearly forty feet square, with a roof and screened sides to keep the bugs at bay.

Do you have any idea how small 40 square feet is. Perhaps you should make it 400 sq ft

Brilliant start to what's going to become an awesome story. Can't wait for some more of the same.

Does not mean 40 sq ft. It means a square 40 ft on each side, or 1600 sq ft. That is rather ridiculously large.

if all you can worry about is the size of the porch read something else this is a fantasic story with great character build and development cant wait for MORE

I usually am not one for stories about father/daughter sex. I had daughters and had to have a very frank discussion with one of them regarding her curiosity about and painfully obvious attraction to daddy. I was still married to her mother with whom I had a healthy intimate relationship. Sadly, that daughter has never found a man who will be faithful to her and have the courage to stay the course.

That said, this story is loaded with plausible relationship opportunities, to include the tenderness and heartfelt affection and struggles that many fathers and daughters experience as we navigate the psychosexual dynamic of raising or growing up in a typical multi gender home. Thank you for this scintillating start to what I hope will be a growing story.

Dad said the porch was nearly 40 feet square. That is 40 feet x 40 feet, making the porch 160 square feet. If it were 40 square feet, that would be only 6.3 feet x 6.3 feet.

Do the maths, as they say in that country.

Actually when you spoke to the reader.... Lost it there for me.

Thought it was well written. Waiting for next installment. Thanks

Very good story. The porch isn't relevant. Go for more.

Can't wait to see what Dad & Daughters do on Vacation. Should be Interesting. Then theres the coming home and Bringing Emily into the Family.

After all the daddy/daughter stories I've read, I have a good idea what seems real versus what is forced, and therefore unbelievable. This is forced and unbelievable.

Assuming daddy does Tabby some more, I'm certain that in a future chapter Diane will have her own time with him. Very predictable.

What was novel was the build up to his sex with Emily. I can even envision her having sex with him and the twins on a visit to the hot tub, which she has already stated she'd like to be invited to try out. It is because of that part of the story that I rated this 3 stars. Without it, you'd have only gotten 2 stars, and then only because I was being charitable.

gave you a 4, slightly forced, too quick, and i assume there will not be a second edition

Just like it would be in life. Keep me laughing all the way in the story. Hope to read much more. Thanks

Wish that was me, can't even get that lucky in my dreams....is there going to be more...would love to see what happens with the other daughter, and maybe the shop lady too! Thank you for sharing!

Looking forward to part 2 and beyond

What a lucky man. And he still has Diane too, possibly. Hell, I just wish I had a daughter

Tabby is an incredible sex queen. Loved the way you brought Dad into the swimwear store. The way they set him up for sex with the beautiful store owner.

OK Tabby is fucking her Dad..What about Diane? Is she even as sex oriented as Tabby?

Will Diane want to screw Dad like Tabby?

Will the store owner become a part of the series once they return from vacation. I assume that is still on for future chapters.

I'm 27, dad Rick is 48. I've been teasing him for years now and have never gotten him to fuck me. He's definitely into me, since he's been stealing my dirty panties since I was sssshhhh....younger. I find them in the hamper, with his cum on them. Yes he tastes wonderful. I'm stacy18_bi at hotmail if you want to hit me up

looking forward to the vacation.

I've always liked stories about twins----------

how soon do they all get together for a taste test?

I hope the store owner is part of the future chapters and maybe after the vacation she can call him and tell him she's pregnant and let him fuck her teen daughter while she watches and masturbates. And he tells his twins to find a cute nerd to knock them up.

Bring Emily back into the mix

lovely, just so erotic, loved it,

Very sexy.

Your Sir have a wonderful gift telling very erotic stories.

Plot is hott.

Sex is Hotter.

Story ok.

Dad a f*ckin' pussy!!!

Why are all these supposedly MORAL guys always so quick to give in? Yes I know it's fantasy, but is it really so hard to TRY and make it believable!!! If I was the father I could see the whole swimsuit place maybe possibly happening, not really, but I'm trying here. Actually, NO I can't as soon as the twins started trying to blackmail me, I would have either threatened to end the shopping right then, if they didn't change their attitudes. or end the whole vacation, period the end. Then If they straightened up and flew right ok. But, then with the bikinis in the hot tub that definitely would have ended the vacation and I would have sent the girls to bed immediately. I know it's not sexy to go that route but it is more realistic, and it would force the twins to be more creative, more subtle, more seducing. And, that would make an ok story GREAT. At least too me.

I just read this for a second time. While I stand by my previous comments, I do need to apologize for the demeanor of those comments. I love stories with romance, and seduction, crumbling of resolve, and acceptance. When I read this the first time I had read several stories looking for those qualities I just mentioned. ALL of them started of great... loving, lively 'real' characters where one or more family members were 'in love' enough that the moral aspect was no longer a negative, and the object of their attraction was not only unaware of their families 'love' but BECAUSE of his/her morals had ignored their own as well. But that's where the great story turn bad... well not bad but not great. After 1 just 1 simple attempt to maintain their moral beliefs they cave. Sure they say it's wrong it shouldn't happen, but they give in anyway. There's no drama, no romance anymore the story loses its credibility and LOVE.

One of the reasons I like erotica better than porn is the storytelling and if it's only NO WAY, WE CAN'T... WELL OK it might as well be a porn script.

I've actually skipped sex scenes in great stories because the story had me hooked. I had to know what was going to happen next or how it would end. I like a good yank story like most do, but I love the more drawn out intricate style with plotlines and twists most.

To the Author; I apologize for my harsh remarks earlier and thank you for writing and giving 'us' a chance to read them

Exciting story...well told, builds well.

Daughters OBVIOUSLY love Dad very much, know that he will teach them and protect them as a good Dad does. Plus, they take care of him ssssooo well...and will continue to do so!

Next chapter!

The story is so unbelievably awful. There is no build-up, no development of feelings, and no sign that feelings ever existed previously. Very disappointed and won't continue reading. I am totally fine with pushing the bounds of believability, but this story just smashed right through them from the very beginning.

Just another stupid story contributing to the all too easily accepted feminist myth about how useless and weak men are.