All Comments on 'Life with the Twins Ch. 02'

Love this story terrific stroke story I came 3 times in the first read. Just read it a second time and came 2 more times. Great potential for multiple partners and 3 ways and even more. Cannot wait till the vacation scenes and who knows who they will run into. Plus still waiting to see Diane being involved with dad and Tabby.

5 stars and a favorite story.

Please continue the story. Can't wait to see what happens on their vacation.

My cock is hard. I had to stroke it.

Adding the Dr. Was a fantastic idea.

Dad was STUPID.. He should have been fucking the Dr.

What about Diane, his other daughter?

Doesn't she deserve some love.

We need another chapter and soon.

All I can say is 'This MUST continue'...!

I agree with everything Prop 69 said! More! Diane?! Cruise?! Thanks for sharing so damn hot!

Loved it! Chapter three should include the other daughter! Five stars.

One of the best I've read on here. Please add another chapter!

I swear, if he says 'uh huh' one more time, or replies by asking a question, I'll castrate him, fry 'em up and make him eat them!! Argh!! ;) The dude is dumb as a rock! Hell, anyone who passes up as much pussy as he does doesn't deserve it!

Geez, reading further along and he's like a broken record! ...yeah? Really? You sure? Fuck her? Now? Where? .....argh!!! ...and so damned ambivalent!

Now, the women in the story have it going on! Smart, funny, entertaining, sneaky, hot horny and delicious!! The doctor cracks me up! It's like all the women know he's a low i.q. Moron, but since he's a softie, handsome moron with a big dick they walk him happily around on a leash, feed him scooby snacks while enjoying his tongue and cock, lol ;)

Too funny!!

Would appreciate it if you continued...

Would be great to continued with the cruise and diane, especially on a pvt yacht

Great story definitely needs a part 3,4 ,5 or more.

Every once in awhile sifting through the ore rocks on Literotica, I encounter a diamond. This is a gem.

Consulting the "doctor" was a great idea. Not that she's doing any doctoring. She's a sex facilitator (ie seducer) for herself and others. Her medical facts appear to be off. When I came across her age 22 for end of penis growth, I checked online. Various sites agreed penis growth ends when puberty ends. Wikipedia puts at 17. Another site 16-18. Obviously individuals will vary but 22 YO seems about as off the chart as a 12 inch penis. But seriously (?!), doc was there for fun rather than medical consultation, and I got more than one chuckle.

Remarkable series so far. Love that the story progresses with imaginative, well told dialog (as opposed to just narration). Also characters are loving and respectful (even the cheeky twins), not the arrogant, aggressive demeaning pricks in some stories.

Easily 5 stars

Paul in Oklahoma

Not what I expected but even more exciting

I have got to find a doctor like that!!!

Oh, the story is rocking hot alright! (Hope Tabby entices her twin to ride daddy at night too!)

...But Gawd!! Shove a ball gag in the dudes mouth already!! I swear, if his constant brain-deadness saying 'uh huh' isn't fucking annoying enough, then his repeatedly turning every conversation into a dumbass question is! Yeesh! 'You want me to fuck her? Sure its a good idea? Right now? Do it here?' I mean, holy fuck batman, just stab him in the spine with a screwdriver, pry open a slot and jam in the end-plug from an Atari joystick, tape his mouth shut and just control the fucker! (umm.. Fucking!). Lol!

Another scorching chapter, thank you.

Oh, Yeah....and Diane is next (the OTHER daughter)...she is gonna be so upset when she finds out about this. Daddy is gonna have to work hard to make it up to her!!

Sylvia, the doctor, is facilitating this behavior while she is also interested in a relationship with Dad...this is making the story SSSOOO 🔥 HOT!! I LOVE IT!!

Now, on to chapter 3, see how this all works out!

silly fantasy ravings

Yeah, literally have not had one in 3 years per health issues coupled with the meds I have to take, but this story gave me a raging erection. 5 stars