All Comments on 'Life with the Twins Ch. 03'

A fuck fest for the whole family. 5 stars.

Is there a single woman that won't throw herself at him, pussy first?

Yes, it's wish fulfillment, but that doesn't mean it has to be this ridiculous. This isn't how humans work.

Waiting for the next Chapter..... Please

several times I had to stop and laugh at what was happening to George, poor man does;t know what;s up or what's was planned with him involved

Dear Lord, please send all the kinky hot ladies in this story to my room. I promise I will look after all of them till the day I die! WITH A SMILE FROM EAR TO EAR!!!!! As for the twins, please send those angels of mercy to me in my dreams....Thank you Lord!

Good story.

However, we got a little show of the twins.

Then dear old dad was fucking every cunt that got in front of him.

Tabby was the one twin that got fucked, and had a threesome too.

Dad should have had Diane and Tabby together, now that would be a story of Life with the twins.

Keep focused.

The next chapter should be the Twins and Dad.

Enough with the tunnels. Every story I’ve read you use the word tunnel. I’m sick of it. You write good stories but be more creative

It's a great story so far but I'd love some pregnancy thrown in to the mix ;)

This is too good to stop now !

I feel that a quite good story has gone somewhat off track. For two reasons. 1) it needs to adhere more -- not entirely -- to the title. And when Diane was finally brought in -- well, maybe it would have been better if Tabitha had "prepared" her beforehand to smooth her initiation. 2). Too many others were brought in without building a connection. So lacked emotion. Hint: Sylvia the doctor (in previous episode) was a slick addition because there was a connection and building. Also she was connected to both Dad AND daughter.

Interesting but not up to previous episodes. No rating.

Has potential for further episode(s).

Paul in Oklahoma

This is a recent story, and I hope there are at least a couple of more in the pipeline. Obviously George is going to have a lot of unexpected fun with people he doesn't know and will (mostly?) never see again while on vacation, but its certain that Tabby and Diane are going to want to get daddy to themselves, together, at some point. And then next week they are going to go back home, and what happens then?

Good story line bring the twins in for a threesome

work in others while on vacation

Keep it going

Don’t stop now when it’s just getting good. MORE!

BUT WE NEED AN ENCORE. can't leave your readers hanging here. we need the foursome!!! love this story. VERY SEXY!!!!

good solid story for this site------but the ending! It's like you forgot to submit a couple more pages. Keep the story going

Great story so far but you need to keep going.

You're still writing as you just submitted a new story. It's been over a year since you published this chapter. When are you going you write chapter 4?

I love your stories but they all seem to be half written. This one could be 3 times the or length with many more adventures. Please continue this one to completion.

Finish your damn stories please.

Hey just loved it. Plenty of nice clean normal sex, who could want more?

It can be somewhat frustrating for your readers when a tale ends without resolution. Judging by the comments, I'm not the only one who would like to see where the story goes from here.

I'd love to see where this series goes. I see you last wrote a part in 2017. I hope you return to it!

Please finish this story. I know it’s been a while, but I think it needs plenty more chapters and an ending.

Awesome story, super erotic... When can you deliver the next chapter? Will include a threesome with the twins?

Please continue this story!

I Really wish you would complete your multi chapter stories. I find it frustrating and annoying you would tease us with the start of a story, and then just wander off to some other idea. I've read several of your multi chapter stories and only found One with a reasonable conclusion.

It's been three years since you left George and the girls in the bungalow. Don't you think that's long enough?

It obviously needs a follow-up !

I hope I don't have to wait over 3 years for the next chapter! There needs to be the threesome, with dad and the twins!

This is a fun story, with a lot of teasing, very erotic, fun plotting a lot for the reader to swim in. Next chapter please.

It might be great if the Male showed a little character growth and stuck to his "no" and his reservations by not engaging, and properly disengaging. Or maybe instead realizing what he is involved in, the love and affection around him, fully engage with those most important to him, to show the respect and love he should feel for these women and their emotions and stop sounding and acting like a dumbass.

Maybe as some middle ground he could just quote Kerim Bey in "From Russia with Love" when his woman wants him like "Back to the salt mines," instead of AGAIN saying something like "uh, are you sure..."

Seriously, great fun, a little character growth please, though...

Great storyline. Sorry that it stopped at 3. Would be great if you had more chapters.

I thought that Dad was getting tiresome, that's why I only gave a 4 this chapter.

It’s a fucking travesty that this series hasn’t been continued since 2017.

It's been a while since I read a story as erotic as that.

Seems to me that there is something missing here!!!

Something like PART 4!!

j

Yeah, this seems really incomplete. You did the same on at least one of your stories. Pretty much sucks.

if inspiration strikes again, you should definitely continue with this story. so much left unfinished

Another story that just stops

What a delughtful story with no ending in sight. So much more to tell. Please finish.

Thank you

Where's part 4 and more?

Another!

This what a good story. I feel like there should be more

Great story except for the vacation multiples... the girls plus Sylvia, enough! Thankbyou.

Hey, please don’t bail on us here! We need more!