All Comments on 'Life's a Beach'

This was a very good start. I think another chapter or two to see where the relationships go. I got the distinct feeling that his wife is not interested in her husband anymore or she's having an affair.

Great hope there a part 2

That's all there is to say

It would be nice if the wife will be included. They will be nude in the rented house and on the secluded beach.

Both Mother and daughter and the Mother and son will be doing sixty nine side by side on the beach or in their living room.

... another chapter would be very nice.

:-)

i enjoy reading all your "tales". they're a lot of fun and very erotic! and well written! although this needs a chapter 2 - how about chapter 3 and maybe even chapter 4 of "Reacquainted" before another chapter here. although this is a 5 start, if i could, thats a 6 star!!!

thanks. keep on writing.

Silly boy! And another after that!

I implore you to write another chapter. This was fantastic and mustn’t stop there!

I loved it. The second chapter should have Calvin and Faye shaving Heather's pussy and then introducing Heather to the wonders of anal sex. When it comes to the wife, I say fuck her! She should say on Monday she's been having an affair with her boss, that she wants a divorce and she's moving across the country immediately. This would free up Calvin to continue his affair with Heather and Faye.

I am with Sex4lf57, maybe a divorce would be good. As his wife makes more money then he does, he could get a nice chunk of alimony and the prospects of he having to get married again is slim.

Good story, a little slow in the start but the finish made reading on good.

more more more. move the wife out of the story and bring on another mature woman for all of them to share

please, please, please !! Some stories that go on for 5 pages are so long & drawn out to get nowhere ! This one was amazing - one of the best I've ever read on here - I just didn't want it to end. I sincerely hope there will be more to cum soon !!!! Keep up the excellent work !

awaiting the next chapter. Story reeled me in and kept me. Very hot material, keep up the work

Don't quit now ! You're on a roll !

Another chapter is definitely needed. Also I don't quite agree with the other comments, I think Trish should be part of the new order.

Of course since she put her marriage last she should be at the bottom, having to service "the girls" before she could get to get fucked by Calvin

very hotttttt

you must write some more i won't to know what that bitch is going to get when she comes ti pick them up

Love the story. Get rid of the wife. Have Mom and Mil move in with Calvin so he can take care of their needs.

SOMETHING I ALWAYS WANTED TO DO WITH MY FIVE SISTERS BUT NEVER GOT AROUND TO DO

Thank you all for the feedback. To goducks1, I haven't forgotten about Reacquainted (or Delightful Renovation for that matter) they're coming. Just needed to write this one whilst the idea was fresh in my mind. Glad many of you liked it.

Love the story so hot that I share it with my wife. I have to say she was excited so fast and so wet she got on top and talked to me about seeing if her older sister would like to make a day and night of fucking both of them. Blasted my load inside and was thinking about doing both. Please more chapters to cum

Loved this story. It was a slow build but you used that time well to create intimacy between the characters. Which is a very arousing factor in good erotica. And the climax at the end was outstanding.

I do have to agree with many of the others though. As I was reading along, everything about the wife says she's cheating on him. Whether you throw her into the mix or not would depend on where you think it should go. Judging from what you've written, I have great faith in where YOU think things should go.

Please build it from there, with or without the wife..

It needs more parts. Why did the wife pull what she did, is she cheating? Also more daddy talk. Older women calling their young lovers daddy is Kinky AF.

This is great. I loved how you realistically built to the sexy climax(es). I will be interested to find out what is going on with the wife. I am still interested in the "hero", his mother, and in-law. They all seem very alive. I love this story.

I am posting as anon because I don't get what they want me to do to sign in. Sorry.

Alex

What an incredible story. Like everyone else has been saying, we need more to this tale. I want to see the shock of the wife when she arrives to the sight of a three-way. She should also have a price to pay for being such a bitch. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Taking time to adjust to the new situation, creating a fun dynamic, while letting the three of them explore and discover, was done very well.

Considering the attitude of the wife, her preference for her work family, I think everyone is now where they want to be.

They should accept the new configurations and move on.

Ch 02? Yes please

This story was so brilliant that it felt like I was watching a movie. Bravo.

I agree with Greek about the wife. Enjoyed the torement you put husband through, rather therm a rush" let's do this". Thank you for your writing.

Great story. Can't wait for Sunday's events. Dump the wife, who is obviously having an affair.

credible incest with dimensional and likable characters. Chapter 2, which is overdue, will probably reveal wife has already replaced hubby.

please continue this great story

You write a great story and definitely one that I would like to continue reading.

Keep it cumming....

He needs to check on Wifey and her penchant for Work over every thing else. otherwise be stupid and dumb. he could dump the wife move to another area and have both mother and MIL with him leaving her the wife her job.

i think his wife is cheating on him and has been for a while. should have a pi investigate her. she doesn't care about him anymore but the 2 mothers do.

would like to read ch.2

More more

The steaks cooked way too fast.

Wife needs to come back, get jealous for a bit, then join in. some mother and daughter alone time / mom and son. then wrap it up. As soon as you start adding other party's to the mix you have to start thinking too much, and who wants to do that while jacking off to an incest story?

Great story. I'd love t hear more about the last day and how wifey found them when she picked them up. She needed a lesson from mom and mom in law.

I love his Mom's reaction to the concept of anal. She's so cute and innocent. I would love a scene involving Faye stretching Heather's asshole with a dildo and discovering, to Heather's embarrassment, that she's a natural gaper. It would also be hot for both moms to rim Calvin. For some reason, the idea of older women (like in their 50's to 60's) preying on and having their way with younger men's cute virgin asses really turns me on. I remember overhearing friends of my grandma and my oldest aunt (as well as my aunt herself) talk about young boys with their 'tight little hineys' that looked good enough to eat and they would all giggle like schoolgirls. I didn't really think anything of it at the time, but I've wondered if they were being literal.

I have always had a thing for my mother in law. However not my own mom. However there was enough here to keep me reading on and on. Very well written for sure. Great storyline. Will be looking for part 2 and more and more. Great job.

Really enjoyed reading your story and would love to read a sequel. Everything in it was hot as hell and seeing some of the kinks taken further would be great. Maybe they run into the guy fishing on the beach :) Any way, thanks a lot!

Two moms gettnng fucked hope he got them both pregnant. For his wife she most likely cheated on him with her clients. That why I like older woman even if they are married too. I fucked my aunt mom friends moms too. They had end up getting pregnant by me. Couple said that they were getting abortion and my mom and aunt said we are keeping the child. I told them that is going to be #7 your going to give birth too. So I said your both moving in with me and both are sharing my bed with 3 us in it. Told my aunt get divorce and for my mom told her since your here get that hairy cunt spread so I can fuck you bareback so pump my cum up in your cunt told my aunt get down between her legs lick the cum out of that hairy cunt.

Really enjoyed this hope you write more great job

From the beginning, I had an idea where this was going. I was pleasantly surprised

when Faye and Calvin's mom came out and went for it. Seriously, who wouldn't. Having these two cougars parading around like they did...flaunting their voluptuous

bodies out in the open as nature intended...the sizzling Sun fueling the innermost

desires. You'd have to be "gay" not to have taken advantage of this opportunity.

Bravo for Calvin, and sporting the Speedos. I'd done the same! Women love to be

teased too.

Really well written and sexy as hell - great!

I only read a few of the comments but wow this was an excellent story!!

It was well written and the building to the end was absolutely awesome.

Just imagining the beach and the tease Faye provided for Calvin on their walk is what really kicked it off! Great work! I would definitely read more if I could make it haha.

another great story idea by a superb writer ruined by anal. I wish there was a no anal tag so I could avoid all this gay stuff.

This is a great story and the possibilities for the next chapter are wide open perhaps Trish was in on it with her mother and set the whole thing up to start an open relationship or the two mothers were already lovers and they were fulfilling Heather’s fantasies. Maybe Trish gets “punished” by the mothers for neglecting Calvin

No bj in 15 yrs.. wtf..

to me there are a few possibilities here

1. the wife is cheating on him

2. the wife set this whole thing up to get him in bed with the moms.

3. the wife really is just a selfish self obsessed spoiled brat that he should divorce right away.

Who wears pantyhose to the beach?

I loved every second

One of the very best I've ever read

The naughty MIL and Mom were fantastic. Love the beach setting and hot tub. Pretty sure the wife continues to choose work over her husband and and he moves in with his mom’s to ‘help’ as a contractor...tool belt, tight shorts, and anal continues.

We need more!

O melhor conto que até o momento li.

I’d love to hear how this plays out more please

I read this over a number of nights and looked forward to finding out what happened next. I enjoyed the fact that you spent a lot of time describing the sexy things along the way. Too many stories are along the lines of, I sniffed my mothers panties, she said my cock was huge and we f****d.

tell us the rest of the story.

An incredible weekend experience with two wonderful amazing loving women who weren't afraid to share their sexual list with each other and a caring son. Too bad the self centered wife lost out on this.

Calvin's wife is surely messed up OR she could have someone or someones at her work.

Calvin, his mother and mother in law enjoyed themselves at the beach and they may continue back at home since the doors to each other have been opened.

Very Good Story. Keep up the good work.

You may never know what happens in the future.

... I think I know where you are going with this so I'm going to keep quiet for now. Keep up the good work.

Mom with the pubic hair for bush fans like me, MiL shaved for the majority. Wonderful story so far!

ryeandgingerayle2@yahoo.ca

Well done!

You've drawn up believable characters who are exploring their own outher limits of their sexuality. The tension was there from the beginning but you waited a good time to let the tension build even more. 🏆

Well written, very erotic and quite believable. I can’t wait to read about what happens when the daughter / wife arrives.

Why is it that 90 or 95 % of the time the male member, be it twosomes or moresome, for their b first encounter, will alway cum ouside of a partner. It's totally unbelievable. And it's not just u!!!!???????????

It's obvious the wife is fucking around, so it's only fair if he gets to also.

Awesome story. Loved the indoor scenes, the beach episode, and the bedroom encounter was pretty good too. Written in such a way that the reader feels like a part of it, observing rather than just reading.

Hope I find another from you.

Very realistic and highly imaginable.

Love it😊

This story was such a pleasure to read, look forward to reading the next part later

One of the absolute hottest stories I have ever read, although some of the sex between the mothers could have been a tad more graphic. Overall, I loved it!! And yes it needs at least one, and possibly two more chapters!!!

The gradual crossing of one threshold after another and the gradual pace as everything unfolded made it a pleasure to read.

I agree entirely with Lonely_reader. Trish needs to learn a lesson on decent behavior.

Maybe she arrives late on Sunday and is forced to watch Calvin gradually seduce her mother with the most graphic display fo mindless, extensive, primal fucking.

But whatever you decide will work.

Good Lord! Before I got halfway when mom Heather finally wrapped her hand around her son's cock in the water, I blew my nut. When Calvin slipped into his mom from behind and then slipped out and into the warm wet mouth of his MIL, I blew again. And again and again. And that was only chapter 1.

Bravo, sunburycd! As a retired Lit author, I give my highest compliment to a well-written stroke story. The story had absolute realism, outstanding pace and two of the hottest moms I've encountered on Lit! Maybe it's just me, but I couldn't help imagining Kay Parker as MILF Heather, and Honey Wilder as MIL MILF Faye. Both were classic stars of 80s Taboo movies for those of you too young to know or remember.

My only nit was not enough dialogue (for me). And mom going from hesitant and reluctance to all-out slut seemed a bit rushed near the end of the first chapter. I would have liked to have seen chapter 1 maybe end more realistically with mom maybe openly masturbating and watching Faye fuck her SIL after the lap dance. And mom hesitantly but ultimately eagerly taking another step into depravity with each chapter.... sucking son's cock in ch 2.... eating Faye's pussy in ch 3 and finally getting fucked in ch 4.

But this was sunburycd's story and I respect his decisions! They still made me cum rockets!! LOL! I look forward to reading part 2 and other stories by one of my new favorite authors. Easily 4 stars (really 4 1/2).

Writerotica (Ray)

This has room for heaps more love it write more & continue with this sexual story

Nah. The guy is a wuss like over 90% of the guys in theses stories. Can't the authors at least put the guy on equal footing. 1*

Outstanding

Amazing, super hot, extremely erotic..

slight rush towards end..could be little slower..but overall great writing...

Keep it up please!!!!

Thanks a ton !!!

Oh WOW !!!!!! LOVED IT !!!!!

Wow! this is one wonderfully sexy and erotic story, very well written and told...........():\

Took four days and six ejaculations to finish story.

Yes another chapter!

Well we really need to know why the wife is such a bitch, so please write another episode

5 stars. Wife is playing away. Great story

Awesome story!! I like how it took a while to transpire but yet it was teasing the whole time.

another chapter> absolutely

You have a talent for writing. Good stuff. 👍