All Comments on 'Lifestyle of a Bisexual Djinn'

It's like you seek out the worst elements in literature and use them to write your stories.

Self insertion

Mary Sue

Poor dialog

Rehashed ideas

Unlikeable protagonist

Trope after predictable trope

Racist, mysoginist, stereotypical attitude from every single character

Do you ever get tired of being told this? It's the same criticism from ten years ago.

Because it (it, not you -- get your pronouns straight) probably gets off on the abuse.