by XtinaSmith2017
thanks for another awesome story. waiting for your next piece is always rewarding. thank you for continuing to post your stories here.
...but to you, PLEASE proofread!
The typos and grammatical errors are very distracting during an otherwise beautifully-written, captivating story.
Love your work. Great to read but a bit depressing knowing i'll never get such experiences :(
This was shockingly well written. A fleshed out world even. What an interguing scenario.
For a second I was really worried that she was going to disappear and prove that this story was mostly illusion and memory.