All Comments on 'Lights, Camera, Action Ch. 02'

by Woody_the_Cowboy

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brosismombrosismomabout 10 years ago
great stuff

next chapter asap

NudistBobNudistBobabout 10 years ago
Great story

Loved the story. But did I miss something? At the end of part 1 she says to him to join her tomorrow night and to bring the camera.

Jump to part 2. It ends with them getting ready for work. So did he go to her room the following morning? Or do they both work the night shift?

Woody_the_CowboyWoody_the_Cowboyabout 10 years agoAuthor
NudistBob

Yes, sorry, you're right. Just a continuity error, perhaps got too carried away with the plot. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
great

Really great . I hope you continue .

Rapier875Rapier875almost 9 years ago
Please, please

..write chapter 3 !

You can't leave it here...........

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