All Comments on 'Like Mother, Like Daughter Ch. 01'

by CiaoSteve

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Excellent!

A unique story idea, beautifully and sensually developed. Can't wait to read more of your writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Sexy Peter

Peter is sometimes described as a "boy" but then has broad shoulders and a muscular chest. Not to mention his big cock. I also imagine he has a bit of dark hair for that sexy muscular chest. Oh, my what a sight!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Very lively story. The author beautifully portrays the sexual emotions in a romantic way.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
hot

It was fun to read the story. Please write more chapters of this story. This is a very different and interesting storyyyyyyyyy

CiaoSteveCiaoSteveover 4 years agoAuthor
Thank You

Thank you all for your positive comments. I'll have a think about whether I want to do a second chapter.

OGHMNWOGHMNWover 4 years ago
Erotic

A Very Hot Erotic Story you have shared! Her need , guilt and human emotions were spot on! Thank You!

taco1085taco1085over 4 years ago
Wow

Love the build up and great read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Kindly write a sequel!!

Very well written.

Many great layers that may be explored

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
More

Have just read this brilliant story, will there be another chapter?

Hope so

albert1eralbert1erover 2 years ago
Thank you

I enjoyed it. Well written.

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I've neglected this for some time, letting real life take over fantasy life. About time I brought it up to date. I'll cherry pick some of my favourites to see if they tickle your fancy just as much as they did mine. You never know, maybe you'll cum to enjoy them, and if you...

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