All Comments on 'L'il Sis Ch. 12'

once again very well done

All I need to say.

Now that was one hell of a series. Very well fucking done!

This story was great. It got me really wet. I was hoping the parents got in there somewhere but even though they didn't this story was one of the best on this site

Write more :-)

Loved the entire novella Except Hunter being so pushy in the beginning and Ally being a little slut. I like how you continued the story and had Ally explain why she did all that crap with Hunter and the stranger. It was also all the more special showing them grow closer together and the true love developing between them to the exclusion of others while maintaining the possibility of them exploring their own sexuality with the consent of their own true partner. Brava!

I really liked the series and really hope you release a

13th chapter as it turns me on, Go Ry and Ally

Holy fuck! That was hot!! Please write more. I loved Ally and Ryan together. And I was surprised to find myself turned on by guy on guy sex. I sort of wanted more of Ryan and Keith to happen. Great story.

Why you have to get other people involved. For once would love to find a story truie or made up to where it is just the siblings and their fight to stay together no matter what no sex with anyone else none. At all just the troubles they will have thru their lives and their kids. Couldn't even read it all when you got others there.

I agree with Olbill. I am glad that you ended it as you did.

This is absolutely my favourite story. This is the one I will end my reading on at this site.

You have made my year.

Thank you ever so much!!.

Could not put it down! Thank you!

Great story and great characters, and despite some minor grammatical errors, I eventually enjoyed it. The hard parts for me to enjoy were Ryan and Ally being passed like a joint! For me, I read these stories for familial romances and not so much for orgies. But thanks to a strong ending I can say I loved the story as whole! So keep writing and I’ll keep reading!

Sad to see it end!! Definitely want more

GOOD STORY OVER ALL, I THOUGHT. RYAN AND ALLISON WERE A CONFUSED COUPLE THAT EVENTUALLY FOUND THEMSELVES IN LOVE. THE SEX WAS OVER DONE BUT NOT TERRIBLE. NO ORGIES PLEASE, IT RUINS THE ROMANCE. AGAIN YOU END A STORY WHEN MORE WAS POSSIBLE.

Using real places you should use the correct name spelling.

Thank you for this it was awesome reading it.

too much of the same & some contradicting comments through out