All Comments on 'Lil' Sister No More!'

I wont be as harsh, but it was really not good. Maybe you could contact a writer or author here and get pointers. And this belonged in the scifi/fantasy category. Or even non erotic. Magic milk increasing tit size does not erotica make. So really pretty bad. But do try again.

even in fantasyland, this was a very hard read. Probably should have been in Non Human and SciFi category.

Sorry to say but FAE are not allowed to change humans attributes or behavior !

Also where and in what category does this come under ? Not incest thats for sure !!

Its a crazy story thats for sure and others might like it, me I think its all wrong !!!

"Her blow sank in almost to the wrist and the dent was only about a sixth of the surface area."

Are you fucking serious? Had to stop there.

From the bits I saw while scrolling down, I'm really glad I stopped reading.

I liked the story, but the plot progression confuses me.

Please do have an editor go over your story.

I loved it! Thank you so much for writing this, and I really look forward to seeing more from you! Keep it up!