All Comments on 'Lilac's Sluts: Heather Does Daddy'

Thanks for sharing this hot father/daughter tale with us. Good build-up, very erotic, great work.

Very hot story. Hope you consider writing more stories involving this hot slut.

Another great story from a great writer!

I really liked how you intertwined the other stories into it

Amazing story. The best Ive read. Well written, great descriptions. |This story will always be a classic incest story to me.......Thank you.

She's quite a gal.

Great story.

You don't have to give the irrelevant description of body parts over and over. And so the forty-year-old diamond salesman who had always wanted to fuck his nineteen-year-old blonde daughter was about to fuck her on the very sheets her grandmother had sent her to furnish her dorm room at the expensive college where... Keep it simple. And never use the medical term "vagina" in writing about an episode in which "cunt" is the power word. I think in one paragraph you use vagina, pussy, and cunt!

You really need to learn how to write so that your words turn the reader on. Yours don't. Get to the fucking point, for God's sake.

Teresa in San Jose

mmmmmmmmmm this story had me stroking my hard dick, heather fucking her dad, lilac fucking hers, Uncle jake fucking his neice, mmmmmmmmmm just can't keep my hand of this dick stroking story. Keep it up and I'm sure my cock will stay up.

AMazing comment.

What a girl! Wow!!