by serialscribbler
Very Erotic, a Young pixie of a woman pursuing a 50 something man. Even a beloved next door neighbor that watched her grow up. I for one would like to read more of this couples adventure. Thank you for it!
Lili and bill need to continue their fucking. Age is not an obstacle. Lili needs to make bill a father
There are some calls for a second chapter, which would be fine, but I rather like where it ends. The "seduction" had been successful; they have broken though the barriers (which is what the story is about, anyway); we can imagine what happens . Of course, I'd be happy to see a continuation myself, but it isn't completely necessary.
You did a great job of varying style and tense. In lesser hands it would have run the risk of becoming disjointed and uneven, but you nailed it.
Bravo (or Brava!)
Talk about a guy being run over by a steam roller, when Lili set her sights on him, there wasn't anyway he could win, except to give in and enjoy the ride. I really liked this story, with the humor and dialog between the two, it was very refreshing. Her chat with her folks was priceless. Thanks for posting.
OMG !!!! Very sexy, can't wait for another chapter. Lil, took control of her desires. Wish I had a neighbor like Bill..
Loved it. Build up was slow but when it got there, wow. Love the way Lilli took his cum and swallowed him, amazing description. Full marks x