I'm not a grammar cop, but it could have used some editing help. Especially when the BF's name kept swiching from Troy to Tony. I gave it 4 🌟's though.
Have a lot of strange fantasies, just throwing them out there for others to enjoy. Also I know my Grammar isn't perfect and I an constantly trying to improve it. Also to help because the site organizes my stories in a confusing way. Mood slime: to read the series in order it...