All Comments on 'Linda Loves Lace'

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Red48beardRed48beardalmost 4 years ago
when

does he get Kitty? she was the inducement in the first place... good story

BentNotBrokenBentNotBrokenalmost 4 years ago
Fantastic (as always)

Yet another well crafted, entertaining story by an engaging and gifted author. Please keep them coming!!!

BuzzCzarBuzzCzaralmost 4 years ago

Interesting setting and plot. I enjoyed the story.

BuzzCzarBuzzCzaralmost 4 years ago

Oh, and I forgot to comment on the nice play on words that makes up the title. Nicely played.

JustplainjeffJustplainjeffalmost 4 years ago

Great story!! By the way, the greatest "voice" of our times, James Earl Jones, was a stutterer.

calgarycamperscalgarycampersalmost 4 years ago
Funny!

A very good story.

Captain MidnightCaptain Midnightalmost 4 years ago
Hey, this was fun!

I'll bet he doesn't stutter when he says the word SHARK.

Wonder what Kitty did when Linda was enjoying herself?

RRC2RRC2almost 4 years ago
Play On Words

There are lots of play on words in this two pager. Very entertaining, very nice.

THANKS

luedonluedonalmost 4 years ago
Let's all stop smirking for a while

As other commenters have said, there was some nice word play in MoreAndMore's entertaining story. I liked it.

In comments on another story (in Group Sex category), Noncal62 noted the marked increase in authors' use of smirking among their characters in Literotica stories recently. and I suggested that it would help if we could all ban it for a while.

When these viruses get a hold, they spread very quickly, and the smirk virus has infected a lot of stories lately.

Lue

dthakerdthakeralmost 4 years ago

Whoa...

Sirs...you are typing right into my heart....love your stories.

Damn beautiful...

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyalmost 4 years ago

Does he stutter when cumming?

JbRobertssonJbRobertssonalmost 4 years ago

Excellent. I like the way he went right back at the girl when she mouthed off. Flashing the loser sign made me laugh, reminded me briefly of that spoiled brat McEnroe's antics from back in the day.

Well done. Full marks. Thanks for posting.

tazz317tazz317almost 4 years ago
DARES, TEASING, FORCING A BET, SARCASM, SAND BAGGING

joins the age of competitiveness at love,..TK U MLJ LV NV

ProfesseurXProfesseurXabout 3 years ago

You are quite creative I have to say.

I really enjoy some of your stories, thank you.

RanDog025RanDog025over 2 years ago

Good story. Was thinking... maybe? 5 stars? Yeah, 5 is about right!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

And no stutter at the end!

Anallicker01Anallicker01over 2 years ago

Good story! Enjoyed the "trickery" Kevin pulled on Kitty & Linda! Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

It’s about time that a cheated on wife doesn’t go back to he ex when he discovers that the grass isn’t greener on the other side of the fence!

dgfergiedgfergiealmost 2 years ago

I love a nice slow romance, but this one was pretty good to. Nice change up from the BTB ones, keep writing. I would critisize some of your stories but I don't know a verb from and adverb and what is this thing they call punctuation? Also thank got for spell check. Keep writing.

SorchakSorchakabout 1 year ago

FYI, shoosh is not a word. The one you wanted was shush.

NitpicNitpic11 months ago
Last

At last,an author who knows how to describe women'undies.

NudeInMaineNudeInMaine5 months ago

Good story. I was waiting for, hoping that Kitty would join them in the bedroom.

fishgetterfishgetterabout 1 month ago

The 'rubbing it in' at the end was a wee over the top. Merely standing behind her at the door, and NO smirk would have been a better (in my opinion) ending for her association with her ex. Aaa treeesome wwould have been kkeen. ;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Nailed it -- again!

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A day without sex is like, um, just kidding. I have no idea. I am judged by what I've done and haunted by what I didn't do. I write stories in an attempt to entertain. If it evokes hate filled or non-constructive comments then I smile while I delete them. I won’t have you...