by moreandmore
does he get Kitty? she was the inducement in the first place... good story
Yet another well crafted, entertaining story by an engaging and gifted author. Please keep them coming!!!
Oh, and I forgot to comment on the nice play on words that makes up the title. Nicely played.
Great story!! By the way, the greatest "voice" of our times, James Earl Jones, was a stutterer.
I'll bet he doesn't stutter when he says the word SHARK.
Wonder what Kitty did when Linda was enjoying herself?
There are lots of play on words in this two pager. Very entertaining, very nice.
THANKS
As other commenters have said, there was some nice word play in MoreAndMore's entertaining story. I liked it.
In comments on another story (in Group Sex category), Noncal62 noted the marked increase in authors' use of smirking among their characters in Literotica stories recently. and I suggested that it would help if we could all ban it for a while.
When these viruses get a hold, they spread very quickly, and the smirk virus has infected a lot of stories lately.
Lue
Whoa...
Sirs...you are typing right into my heart....love your stories.
Damn beautiful...
Excellent. I like the way he went right back at the girl when she mouthed off. Flashing the loser sign made me laugh, reminded me briefly of that spoiled brat McEnroe's antics from back in the day.
Well done. Full marks. Thanks for posting.
joins the age of competitiveness at love,..TK U MLJ LV NV
You are quite creative I have to say.
I really enjoy some of your stories, thank you.
Good story! Enjoyed the "trickery" Kevin pulled on Kitty & Linda! Thanks
It’s about time that a cheated on wife doesn’t go back to he ex when he discovers that the grass isn’t greener on the other side of the fence!
I love a nice slow romance, but this one was pretty good to. Nice change up from the BTB ones, keep writing. I would critisize some of your stories but I don't know a verb from and adverb and what is this thing they call punctuation? Also thank got for spell check. Keep writing.
Good story. I was waiting for, hoping that Kitty would join them in the bedroom.
The 'rubbing it in' at the end was a wee over the top. Merely standing behind her at the door, and NO smirk would have been a better (in my opinion) ending for her association with her ex. Aaa treeesome wwould have been kkeen. ;)