All Comments on 'Little Man Pretty Girl Ch. 01'

So happy to see you back writing LOVE IT LOVED IT LOVED IT

your writing is so vivid i can almost feel and certainly wish a clit...maybe yours...was sl;iding into my pussy...although i like to call it my cunt, it seem more like a slut woman and thats what i wish i were. drell me up, take me out, have your friends fuck my cuntover and over while rubbiong my clit. heaven!

I like this story alot it was hot

So far I like the story. Please finish the story.

absolutely one of the best story of lust and love , i've read ...ty so very much for writing this

Never write garbage like Jackie again. Stick to beautiful stories like this one and Oasis.

I found this story to be so real. It was something that I know is fiction but the reality was so genuine. I can't wait to see what happens next

It was such a sweet and believable story that I would have liked to change places with either one of them. a love story thanks

I have to say that I truly enjoyed your description of the love making scene in bed between Janie and Jerri. Made me wish I could have experienced the same beautiful moments and made me so hard. Thank you Scribbler.

Wow, what a wonderful story! Thank you!! Wow!

Great story. I love it very much. But you need an editor to correct the mistakes that you made. Calling Jamie the name Julie once. You have many grammar errors wrong words and typos that take away part of the flow of the story. It is always good to have someone read your story before it is finalized and submitted.

JR

Great story

I like your mind. But it is "Of course" , Not "Of cause".

I loved this story and I think it should be compulsory reading for all boys and men before they go anywhere near an ass for the first time. Giving oneself like this should be the most wonderful experience ever but so often that's not the case.

I really liked the way you structured the story and the detail you gave pressed all my buttons.

I wish the first time I let a guy remove my panties and take my cherry had been as magical as it was for Geraldine.

A lovely story. Thank you.